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heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:14 am
by Tyler41
i recorded just vocals, and guitar

tell me what you think

http://www.urbanturf.net/cathy.mp3

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 12:30 pm
by ReemFTW
love it!! if vocals are a bit enhanced it'd be nicer :]

could you post lyrics here?

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 8:56 pm
by Heather
cool, sounds very blink-182

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:30 pm
by Kelbunk
fenderrocks wrote:cool, sounds very blink-182
reminds me of a combonation between the rock show by blink and with me by sum 41

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 12:25 am
by Aaron
This is great! it sounds like a mix of Bob by Nofx, Summer by Sum 41, and Carousel by Blink-182. Me likey.

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 2:05 am
by Tyler41
thank you all!

yeah, i just recorded it with me playing guitar and singing at the same time on my shitty little computer mic from probably 1990-something haha

here are the lyrics

All dressed up for the party you're throwing
But no one's going to come
Your 18 dogs are the only one's showing
And now you're feeling dumb
Don't you wish you weren't an ass
Maybe things wouldn't be the same
If you could only change your past
You're life wouldn't be so lame

Well I guess it goes to show
If you're an asshole
Everyone you know
And everyone you control
Will hate you
Betray you
Degrade you
And rape you

Up all night
Waiting for your friends to show up
Guess you never knew that your sight
Makes them want to throw up
And your voice rings threw their ears
Like the shear sound of pain
And even after a few beers
They will still feel the same

Well I guess it goes to show
If you're an asshole
Everyone you know
And everyone you control
Will hate you
Betray you
Degrade you
And rape you

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 3:36 am
by ReemFTW
thanks =] they're good!

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 4:31 am
by Tyler41
GreenReem41 wrote:thanks =] they're good!
thank you!

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 6:16 pm
by samueeL
Sounds like blink-182 to me :D

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 8:09 pm
by Tyler41
samueeL wrote:Sounds like blink-182 to me :D
haha sweet, thanks

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 11:14 pm
by Kelbunk
those are deadly lyrics hahaha

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 11:55 pm
by Aaron
good lyrics but not enough

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 4:06 am
by Tyler41
Da_Aman wrote:good lyrics but not enough
yeah, this is just a little demo
still work in progress

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2009 11:26 pm
by Aaron
Cool, let us know when you have the final version ready. I wanna hear it.

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:04 am
by Tyler41
Da_Aman wrote:Cool, let us know when you have the final version ready. I wanna hear it.
alright, ill do that

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 3:35 am
by kevin5064
LOL

talk about a rock show/fat lip rip off.

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 5:17 am
by Tyler41
kevin5064 wrote:LOL

talk about a rock show/fat lip rip off.
?

i doesnt have any of the same chords as either of those songs

and the lyrics arent anything like either for those songs

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:26 pm
by PunkSteve
its good, a good structure, nice melody :)

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 8:26 pm
by PunkSteve
u should do another, similar, maybe an acoustic one to showcase vocals more??

think onit :)

Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:01 pm
by Madjid
Sounds like old Blink.
You're amazing, keep up the good work, dude.