i recorded just vocals, and guitar
tell me what you think
http://www.urbanturf.net/cathy.mp3
heres a song i wrote called Cathy
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heres a song i wrote called Cathy
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
love it!! if vocals are a bit enhanced it'd be nicer :]
could you post lyrics here?
could you post lyrics here?
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
reminds me of a combonation between the rock show by blink and with me by sum 41fenderrocks wrote:cool, sounds very blink-182
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
This is great! it sounds like a mix of Bob by Nofx, Summer by Sum 41, and Carousel by Blink-182. Me likey.
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
thank you all!
yeah, i just recorded it with me playing guitar and singing at the same time on my shitty little computer mic from probably 1990-something haha
here are the lyrics
All dressed up for the party you're throwing
But no one's going to come
Your 18 dogs are the only one's showing
And now you're feeling dumb
Don't you wish you weren't an ass
Maybe things wouldn't be the same
If you could only change your past
You're life wouldn't be so lame
Well I guess it goes to show
If you're an asshole
Everyone you know
And everyone you control
Will hate you
Betray you
Degrade you
And rape you
Up all night
Waiting for your friends to show up
Guess you never knew that your sight
Makes them want to throw up
And your voice rings threw their ears
Like the shear sound of pain
And even after a few beers
They will still feel the same
Well I guess it goes to show
If you're an asshole
Everyone you know
And everyone you control
Will hate you
Betray you
Degrade you
And rape you
yeah, i just recorded it with me playing guitar and singing at the same time on my shitty little computer mic from probably 1990-something haha
here are the lyrics
All dressed up for the party you're throwing
But no one's going to come
Your 18 dogs are the only one's showing
And now you're feeling dumb
Don't you wish you weren't an ass
Maybe things wouldn't be the same
If you could only change your past
You're life wouldn't be so lame
Well I guess it goes to show
If you're an asshole
Everyone you know
And everyone you control
Will hate you
Betray you
Degrade you
And rape you
Up all night
Waiting for your friends to show up
Guess you never knew that your sight
Makes them want to throw up
And your voice rings threw their ears
Like the shear sound of pain
And even after a few beers
They will still feel the same
Well I guess it goes to show
If you're an asshole
Everyone you know
And everyone you control
Will hate you
Betray you
Degrade you
And rape you
All that I need is time for me to breathe. Dream little dreams that only I believe. Now that I see beyond the light, I'm gonna be, I'll be alright.
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
thank you!GreenReem41 wrote:thanks =] they're good!
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
Sounds like blink-182 to me :D
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
haha sweet, thankssamueeL wrote:Sounds like blink-182 to me :D
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
good lyrics but not enough
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
yeah, this is just a little demoDa_Aman wrote:good lyrics but not enough
still work in progress
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Cool, let us know when you have the final version ready. I wanna hear it.
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
alright, ill do thatDa_Aman wrote:Cool, let us know when you have the final version ready. I wanna hear it.
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
LOL
talk about a rock show/fat lip rip off.
talk about a rock show/fat lip rip off.
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
?kevin5064 wrote:LOL
talk about a rock show/fat lip rip off.
i doesnt have any of the same chords as either of those songs
and the lyrics arent anything like either for those songs
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
its good, a good structure, nice melody :)
Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
u should do another, similar, maybe an acoustic one to showcase vocals more??
think onit :)
think onit :)
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Re: heres a song i wrote called Cathy
Sounds like old Blink.
You're amazing, keep up the good work, dude.
You're amazing, keep up the good work, dude.
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