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I writting this song right now!

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 7:29 am
by Dylan
seriously, i just wanted to write a song and the only way i would sit down and write one is if i started to write a thread and jsut let it all pour out. so here it is, im actually pretty happy with it :D.

its about a guy who likes a girl, asks her out, the become "gf and bf" but what they thought would be great, really didn't turn out that way.

***this is in no way realated to something that happened to me, its just "pouring of the thoughts'***

(the real title)

"How It Was Supposed to Be"

i writting this song now
to tell you how i feel, about you...
i lie awake thinking about the day
when and if i'd ask, and how it would be...

i think about you
i think about me
i think about how it could be
i think about US and about WE
but i realize, it could never be.

today's the day ill finally ask
ill put the first verse in the past
i will tell how you much i care
i won't leave you, i sware...

it will be, me and you
forever, it's true
i won't leave, you will be,
my one and only, i garantee...

i think about you
i think about me
i think about how it will be
i think about US and about WE

and i realize
it wasn't ment to be
Don't disagree, it will be
just a bump in the road of our lives...

i thought about you
i thought about me
i thought about how it was glee
but now it's not, we both forgot
about how it was supposed to be......

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:22 pm
by AVA182b
i like the verses a lot
chorus...not so much

Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 12:06 am
by Gibsum 41
AVA182b wrote:i like the verses a lot
chorus...not so much
+1