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I writting this song right now!

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seriously, i just wanted to write a song and the only way i would sit down and write one is if i started to write a thread and jsut let it all pour out. so here it is, im actually pretty happy with it :D.

its about a guy who likes a girl, asks her out, the become "gf and bf" but what they thought would be great, really didn't turn out that way.

***this is in no way realated to something that happened to me, its just "pouring of the thoughts'***

(the real title)

"How It Was Supposed to Be"

i writting this song now
to tell you how i feel, about you...
i lie awake thinking about the day
when and if i'd ask, and how it would be...

i think about you
i think about me
i think about how it could be
i think about US and about WE
but i realize, it could never be.

today's the day ill finally ask
ill put the first verse in the past
i will tell how you much i care
i won't leave you, i sware...

it will be, me and you
forever, it's true
i won't leave, you will be,
my one and only, i garantee...

i think about you
i think about me
i think about how it will be
i think about US and about WE

and i realize
it wasn't ment to be
Don't disagree, it will be
just a bump in the road of our lives...

i thought about you
i thought about me
i thought about how it was glee
but now it's not, we both forgot
about how it was supposed to be......
you have far too much time on your hands

"The missing part of me that grows around me like a cage..."
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i like the verses a lot
chorus...not so much
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AVA182b wrote:i like the verses a lot
chorus...not so much
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