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Chorus for a song Im writing

Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 2:28 am
by AVA182b
As it falls let it die
Hearts shatter when they hit the floor
We lost it all, they said you cried
You can't look back if you walk out that door

Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2007 8:38 pm
by samueeL
Wow, nice :) I have one chorus too: Too late my girl its over, memories broken, nice to see you, guess we don't see anymore.

Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 10:57 pm
by AVA182b
samueeL wrote:Wow, nice :) I have one chorus too: Too late my girl its over, memories broken, nice to see you, guess we don't see anymore.
thanks and rad

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:35 pm
by zpunkrock
the best chorus i've written is simple but amazingly catchy.

pinch punch, first day of the month,i, dont see the point in wasting my time with you
pinch punch, first day of the month,i, dont see the point in wasting my time with you,
From another point of view.

It'sbetter with the music lol. :!: :)

Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 11:01 pm
by LTS
the best chorus i've written is"

"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:04 pm
by HilgaMan
Luke The Spook (LTS) wrote:the best chorus i've written is"

"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"
^Very catchy. I think that would be super hit even without any actual verses. 8)

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 9:32 pm
by LTS
HilgaMan wrote:
Luke The Spook (LTS) wrote:the best chorus i've written is"

"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"
^Very catchy. I think that would be super hit even without any actual verses. 8)
it sounds like something a boy band would sing.

Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:46 am
by HilgaMan
Luke The Spook (LTS) wrote:
HilgaMan wrote:
Luke The Spook (LTS) wrote:the best chorus i've written is"

"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"
^Very catchy. I think that would be super hit even without any actual verses. 8)
it sounds like something a boy band would sing.
^It does a bit... :roll:

Re: Chorus for a song Im writing

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:38 am
by Avey41
one of my choruses>>>

I’m falling falling
I see the shallow grave in front of me
I’m falling tell me is this a dream
Wake me up now let me see
Is this the end of me
Cause I’m falling falling