Chorus for a song Im writing

[AVA182b]

As it falls let it die
Hearts shatter when they hit the floor
We lost it all, they said you cried
You can't look back if you walk out that door

[samueeL]

Wow, nice :) I have one chorus too: Too late my girl its over, memories broken, nice to see you, guess we don't see anymore.

[AVA182b]

Wow, nice :) I have one chorus too: Too late my girl its over, memories broken, nice to see you, guess we don't see anymore.

thanks and rad

[zpunkrock]

the best chorus i've written is simple but amazingly catchy.

pinch punch, first day of the month,i, dont see the point in wasting my time with you
pinch punch, first day of the month,i, dont see the point in wasting my time with you,
From another point of view.

It'sbetter with the music lol. :)

[LTS]

the best chorus i've written is"

"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"

[HilgaMan]

the best chorus i've written is"

"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"

^Very catchy. I think that would be super hit even without any actual verses. 8)

[LTS]

the best chorus i've written is"

"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"

^Very catchy. I think that would be super hit even without any actual verses. 8)

it sounds like something a boy band would sing.

[HilgaMan]

the best chorus i've written is"

"goats goats goats goats goats goats goats rabbits?, no , goats!"

^Very catchy. I think that would be super hit even without any actual verses. 8)

it sounds like something a boy band would sing.

^It does a bit...

[Avey41]

one of my choruses>>>

I’m falling falling
I see the shallow grave in front of me
I’m falling tell me is this a dream
Wake me up now let me see
Is this the end of me
Cause I’m falling falling