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songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:36 pm
by Xx_sum41_xX
i guess i'm not so good. but nevermind...

there are many points of view
there are many things to do
and many things went wrong
but life still goes on

can i turn back time
can i go to the other side
there's no place i know
and no places here to go

should i break this down
before i lose myself
before i fall apart
before i forget who i am

there are some ways to go
there are some things i know
and many things are wrong
i just forgot what i've done

so many faces with no soul
show me someone i don't know
many places left to see
and many places left for me

could i go through this
or just lose myself
i guess i can't resist
'cause i don't know what this is

there are many points of view
and there are many things to do
can you show me something new
or just something that i knew


:confusion:

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:41 pm
by The Witness
i think its pretty decent

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 3:01 pm
by Xx_sum41_xX
i think i write in a very easy way...so it's a bit "boring". :silly:

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 3:03 pm
by The Witness
i wouldnt necessarily say "boring"

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 3:38 pm
by Xx_sum41_xX
well, when i write something, i always think "that's good!"...but the next day i think "F***!, what the hell did i write!"

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Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:00 pm
by The Witness
idk

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:52 pm
by Madjid
So the whole thing is a chorus, or a bunch of choruses?

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:24 pm
by Xx_sum41_xX
well, you can see it as a bunch of choruses or only many verses...it's however you want it to.

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 8:41 pm
by The Witness
Fuck Nuts, Got Nipples? wrote:So the whole thing is a chorus, or a bunch of choruses?
nah its one long solo

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 12:17 am
by Slither
It's better then most shit people post here.

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 2:06 am
by The Witness
Slither wrote:It's better then most shit people post here.
id take that as a compliment

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:49 am
by the perfect li e
quite good ! I think it ain't crap at all.

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:55 pm
by silverdolphin
great song >>> it's better than half of the stuff i write ...

Re: songs, poems, texts,... whatever.

Posted: Sat Jul 11, 2009 1:13 pm
by Xx_sum41_xX
thanks!! =)