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Xx_sum41_xX
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by Xx_sum41_xX »
i guess i'm not so good. but nevermind...
there are many points of view
there are many things to do
and many things went wrong
but life still goes on
can i turn back time
can i go to the other side
there's no place i know
and no places here to go
should i break this down
before i lose myself
before i fall apart
before i forget who i am
there are some ways to go
there are some things i know
and many things are wrong
i just forgot what i've done
so many faces with no soul
show me someone i don't know
many places left to see
and many places left for me
could i go through this
or just lose myself
i guess i can't resist
'cause i don't know what this is
there are many points of view
and there are many things to do
can you show me something new
or just something that i knew
don't cry...say fuck you and smile!
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by The Witness »
i think its pretty decent
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by Xx_sum41_xX »
i think i write in a very easy way...so it's a bit "boring".
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by The Witness »
i wouldnt necessarily say "boring"
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by Xx_sum41_xX »
well, when i write something, i always think "that's good!"...but the next day i think "F***!, what the hell did i write!"
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idk
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by Madjid »
So the whole thing is a chorus, or a bunch of choruses?
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by Xx_sum41_xX »
well, you can see it as a bunch of choruses or only many verses...it's however you want it to.
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by The Witness »
Fuck Nuts, Got Nipples? wrote:So the whole thing is a chorus, or a bunch of choruses?
nah its one long solo
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by Slither »
It's better then most shit people post here.
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by The Witness »
Slither wrote:It's better then most shit people post here.
id take that as a compliment
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by silverdolphin »
great song >>> it's better than half of the stuff i write ...
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by Xx_sum41_xX »
thanks!! =)
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