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Poem/Song for school

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 12:25 am
by Bass Cone
Blazing down the interstate
It was 11 o'clock at night
The moon was annoying and cryptic above me
I couldn't stand the light

Turned on the radio
Tried to listen to some music
The songs were emotionless to me
I was ready to lose it

There was no direction
I had no where to go
My mind was a balloon suffocated with air
Ready to blow

I took a look outside my window
at the reflection staring back
In my eyes was an image of a train
Just about to crash

I saw the warning below the scene
About objects in the mirror
It was the first time it made any sense to me
I realized they really are closer than they appear.

Re: Poem/Song for school

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 12:33 am
by Madjid
Bass Cone wrote: scene
<3

Re: Poem/Song for school

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 1:45 am
by The Witness
not bad :happy:

Re: Poem/Song for school

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:15 am
by Dylan
*thumbs-up!*

Re: Poem/Song for school

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:44 am
by Bass Cone
<3

Re: Poem/Song for school

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:38 am
by Hentaiman
I loved it, good job, BC!!

Re: Poem/Song for school

Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:49 am
by Pedro
HEY BRITTANY!

Re: Poem/Song for school

Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 2:06 pm
by silverdolphin
Cool ................. Not bad ..

Re: Poem/Song for school

Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 7:28 pm
by Aaron
sweet. the first thing I thought of for some reason to put this to was Black Sunshine by White Zombie
(music starts at :53)