True Love Died

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Dan
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True Love Died

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My first song I've written in an age.

Hope you enjoy it

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Settle down I'll tell a story
Of a guy who could've been me
Was writing of stars falling from above
And of course he knew he should
He had to tell the whole world
Of a crazy little game he played called love

Of a time when things were easy
And just anything could please me
When I saw the wind running through your hair
And they say it’s just a feeling
But to me it’s got more meaning
Than that diamond-crusted ring I've seen you wear

Don't believe what they say
True love died yesterday
I don't want to believe
But I can't look away
In the city that sleeps
In the night more than day
I am hoping that someday
I'll know what to say

If you hear somebody calling
Please believe it’s not a warning
Someone’s dying of a broken heart down here
And if you tell me that you’re frightened
That one day your life just might end
I'll still hold you close forever you my dear

Don't believe what they say
True love died yesterday
I don't want to believe
But I can't look away
In the city that sleeps
In the night more than day
I am hoping that someday
I'll know what to say

Maybe someday you will tell me
There’s a million songs already
That sound all the same and this is just one more
But I don’t care about you
And of all the shit we've been through
Because no-ones ever felt like me before

Don't believe what they say
True love died yesterday
I don't want to believe
But I can't look away
In the city that sleeps
In the night more than day
I am hoping that someday
I'll know what to say

Don't believe what they say
True love died yesterday
I don't want to believe
But I can't look away
In the city that sleeps
In the night more than day
I am hoping that someday
I'll know what to say
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Re: True Love Died

Post by Slither »

Pretty good.

But why do those songs always have to be negative? Love is forever! :glad:
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Slither wrote:Pretty good.

But why do those songs always have to be negative? Love is forever! :glad:
love sucks, thats why
Children of the beast embrace,
To scorn and the human race,
Consume the light that hugs the earth,
And aid the womb in giving birth,
To a group that will appear,
And guide you through this final year,
The dark armies then will come,
When the sum is 41

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Ahw, how sad.
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Post by Hentaiman »

Dan, thats a great song right here, well done, man!
And yeah, love sucks so i'll have to agree with those negative things about love hahaha, but good song.
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upperclasszero wrote:
Slither wrote:Pretty good.

But why do those songs always have to be negative? Love is forever! :glad:
love sucks, thats why
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The City Drive wrote:
upperclasszero wrote:
Slither wrote:Pretty good.

But why do those songs always have to be negative? Love is forever! :glad:
love sucks, thats why
words of wisdom
*nods wisely*
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turtlehobopirate wrote:
The City Drive wrote:
upperclasszero wrote:
Slither wrote:Pretty good.

But why do those songs always have to be negative? Love is forever! :glad:
love sucks, thats why
words of wisdom
*nods wisely*
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