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Crazy

Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:37 pm
by Z234
I wrote it last night pretty much without thinking and I havent gone over it and refined it at all... but here it is

Crazy

I say its time for a stand
Against the evils of corruption
Political creeps and kings of disruption
How did it get so bad
Its like our whole society has gone mad

(chorus)
I might be a little crazy
But it just doesn't phase me
I am who I am
I don't always have to listen to uncle sam

I can think for myself
I won't let them put me on the shelf
Thats what the government wants to do,
It'll get to the point where they wont listen to you
Dont you people see
Its not up to you or me
its not about the pride of the free

(chorus)
You might think Im crazy
But it just doesnt phase me
I am who I am
I dont always have to follow uncle sam

I'm a damn man
they cant telll me what to do
In the end all they want to do is screw you
So lets stand up and give it a fight
Behind your back they've been taking away your rights
Is that fair?
I dont think they care
All they care about is money
They look at me like Im funny
But its the truth
Look at the whole fucking world if you want some proof

Yes I might be crazy
but it just doesnt phase me
I am who I am
Now point that finger at uncle sam



let me know what you think. Things I could improve on and shit like that
If you think I suck, tell me I suck.. Im not a sensative bitch

Re: Crazy

Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 2:49 pm
by Madjid
Z234 wrote: If you think I suck, tell me I suck.. Im not a sensative bitch
Everything you posted above was beautiful, except for this sentence.
I assume you're a new member, since you joined like 30 minutes ago.
Don't jump into assumptions like these, dude, your song is awesome.

Btw, do you happen to know someone by the name of Mig?

Re: Crazy

Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 3:34 pm
by Z234
madjid wrote:
Z234 wrote: If you think I suck, tell me I suck.. Im not a sensative bitch
Everything you posted above was beautiful, except for this sentence.
I assume you're a new member, since you joined like 30 minutes ago.
Don't jump into assumptions like these, dude, your song is awesome.

Btw, do you happen to know someone by the name of Mig?
I only said that cuz I want people to say what they really think.. not what they think i want to here.. that wont make me any better

im happy to know that you like it

and no, i dont know anybody by the name of mig

Re: Crazy

Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 8:50 pm
by CIRCUITzach
leave im the only zach here

Re: Crazy

Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 9:08 pm
by sum54184
dude great song keep going
you do not suck btw

Re: Crazy

Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:17 am
by Kelbunk
ya i rather liked it alot

Re: Crazy

Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:21 am
by Bass Cone
to be honest, i thought it was a bit generic.