My first song...

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My first song...

Post by R. »

...Yay me :D

Now, be honest what you think...

I still am finding a way to record drums, the premade drum beats don't fit.

So anyways, sorry for any cut in the quality, my marshall amp has no earphone out like me 40 dollar shit one does.

So I did it the old fashioned way, microphone to the amp :glad:

Tell me what you think, and I saved you the download and me the mediafire upload, you can just listen here:
http://www.myspace.com/nohopegroup
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Re: My first song...

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ehhhhhhhhhh

....u want my honest opinion?
i thought it was ok....not a very clever or original guitar riff, but not bad. i dont blame the fact that the recording was shit....not ur fault at all

try and make it more creative, maybe record over that another guitar

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Re: My first song...

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Shiv wrote:ehhhhhhhhhh

....u want my honest opinion?
i thought it was ok....not a very clever or original guitar riff, but not bad. i dont blame the fact that the recording was shit....not ur fault at all

try and make it more creative, maybe record over that another guitar
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Re: My first song...

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upperclasszero wrote:
Shiv wrote:ehhhhhhhhhh

....u want my honest opinion?
i thought it was ok....not a very clever or original guitar riff, but not bad. i dont blame the fact that the recording was shit....not ur fault at all

try and make it more creative, maybe record over that another guitar
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pretty good for a first song tho
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Re: My first song...

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You definitely need a drummer. :silly:
I like the song! the recording is crappy but I understand.
But it just sounds weird, like the sound is forcing it's way to my ears. It's weird but it's good. :mrgreen:
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Re: My first song...

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it's.. alright :/
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