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don't really know what its called, I wanted to use some of my favorite sum41 words
I added a little "bass" but messed it up on the bridge
lyrics
find me somewhere in my mind
these thoughts have me so confined
now I'm way out of line
I'm feeling so far behind

these walls are closing in
paranoia's setting in
don't know how to oppose
whats arcaned in me
ground beneath me starts to fall
but I'm still blind to it all
drowning in my own thoughts
don't know what I've lost

can't convey these words I say
they're coming out way delayed
inhibitions laying wake
risen by a bad mistake

so bare my pessimistc ways
and I will try to change
let go all the regrets
my destination's have been met
you'll find me bleeding out my heart
to give you everything I've got

i really liked it

here are a few suggestions
1) get a mic


thats it
other than that it was awesome
i loved the lyrics, and the guitar riffs were awesome....though i had no idea if that was a guitar or bass lol

the guitar riff is rad in this

you have a great voice

keep it up

I really liked it (especially your voice) but I think you should change some guitar parts in the beginning since hearing that riff over and over for so long makes it kinda boring.
Lyrics are great too, excellent work!

Thats great riff

Nice!!
I like the way you changed sums lyrics to fit with your own, they really suited =]

This song was written about me.
I get the message, Heather

lol, madjid
thanks a lot guys I really appreciate it. I agree I need to get a mic lol. I came up with that riff on my acoustic, then switched it over to the electric. I also agree it needs a variation in chords in the verses or bridge, I'll work on that. I loved the little "bass" part so I added it in the song, not sure if it fits just right though. And I love deryck's writting style and the uncommon words he uses, so that was my inspiration.
thanks so much for listening to it guys!

oh yeah and the riff is: Dsus2, Am, Cadd9, Em

Sounds really good, nice job. Just get a mic and I bet you'll sound pretty fuckin' awesome with a decent mic