Fool's Poem

[Dan]

Been a while since I last posted a song (I'll Be Waiting), so here's a fairly new one. It's called 'Fool's Poem'. Also, my band will (we hope to) be releasing our record on the 28th, so I'll post it on tns for you guys. I actually posted a preview of it on our myspace www.myspace.com/churchdestroymusic

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I'll stand in the window of life and wave as you leave,
and the feeling depressed in my chest makes it to hard to breathe,
like the time when I stood on the deck of a ship going down,
and the look on your face told me I'd be replaced in the hour,

And i'm trying to write the words to a love song,
but they're just not coming cause I'm not in love,
and I just can't belive that I gave you some meaning,
I gave you too much your deserving of none

I'll stand in the window of life and wave you along
And the look in your eyes tell me ive been despised for so long
Like the time when we took our clothes off and danced in the rain,
and now we're alone all you do is moan and complain

And i'm trying to write the words to a love song,
but they're just not coming cause I'm not in love,
and I just can't belive that I gave you some meaning,
I gave you too much your deserving of none

[bridge]

Come sit in my arms
and talk of the stars
said what do you think
of how lucky we are
To live life and lose love
Is made to be set
and although im better
I live with regret

And i'm trying to write the words to a love song,
but they're just not coming cause I'm not in love,
and I just can't belive that I gave you some meaning,
I gave you too much your deserving of none

I'll stand in the window of life in hope you'll return
and for so long ive been wrong but I guess that I'll never learn
Somehow I think you'll come back to me give me a sign
And just like before when you walked out my door last time

And i'm trying to write the words to a love song,
but they're just not coming cause I'm not in love,
and I just can't belive that I gave you some meaning,
I gave you too much your deserving of none

[xmarryxx]

omg, thats so beautiful and sad, it nearly brought tears to my eyes. your an incredible lyricist. and i love the title.

[Shiv]

and talk of the stars
said what do you think
of how lucky we are

so long goodbye lyrics????

just kidding
its good...real good

cant wait to hear the actual song

[Hentaiman]

Thats really good :O
And the Sample of your EP sounds great too, hope to hear it soon :D

[Dan]

Thanks for the comments guys.

If all goes well, you should hear the EP by monday... not promising anything yet.

[PunkSteve]

thats pretty inspiring... its hard to write songs about things, & youve incorporated that into a song...good :)