Special Place In My Heart

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Special Place In My Heart

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this is about the first love of my life. it basically talks about how i dealt with losing her then and how i deal with it now. btw, please dnt take the end of the first verse seriously, it's just a metaphor.

Intro
Before you turn your back and try to ignore,
I swear I've never spoken like this before.
It's all been bottled up and never released.
Let me get it out so we can rest in peace.

Verse 1
Pictures hang from my wall. See your face on them all.
Can't bring myself to take them down, and move on without a frown.
When we lost the flame to our fire, it gave me an immortal desire,
to see your hand and hold your face, hold you close and give you grace.
But you needed space and time away. I'd have given anything to make you stay.
In the battle of depression, I begin a haunting obsession.
Held in my hand is a picture of us, blood on my shirt from fatal cuts.
Knife on the floor put slashes in my throat. Lying next to it is my suicide note.

Chorus
You will never know what you were for me. I'll always keep part of you with me.
I know you still think of me, I think of you too.
The words you'd say to me, the happiness that we knew.
I'll never let you go, even when we're apart.
'Cause you'll always hold a special place in my heart.

Verse 2
From the burning explorer in a parking lot,
to the steamy underground deep in thought.
The touch of your lips, the taste of your kiss.
Pretend like everything is OK, these words I'm too scared for you to hear me say.
My knees drop to the ground, like a tower falling down.
Always wonder who I've been replaced with. Wanna know what they are laced with.
The games they play are just to get one thing.
There's a song in your heart that only I can sing.
I know I may be selfish, I may seem a little shady.
It's just the way I feel, I'll always love you baby.

(Chorus)

Bridge
Won't you please come back to me, 'cause I believe we are meant to be.
Since you left there's a giant void, that does nothing but keep me paranoid.
If you come back then you will see, how clear it is we are meant to be.

(Chorus)

Outro
You don't have to say goodbye, but you can't be afraid to try,
something new.
Don't live with regrets, take every chance you get,
it's the best you can do. It's all up to you.
I'll never say goodbye, I can't be afraid to try,
something new.
Can't live with regrets, take every chance I get,
it's all I can do. I'll never forget you.
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i really like the beginning
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this is really good..very emotional. :happy:
i liked it alot.
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thank you so much! :smile:
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sprinks41 wrote:thank you so much! :smile:
anytime...
it sounds like the kind of song thatd sound truly great if it were sang with like..an acoustic instrumental part.
haha if that ever happens let me know
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it's pretty good.
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thank you :smile:
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nice work Jim. :agreed:
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Neverwakeup wrote:nice work Jim. :agreed:
thank you :smile:
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Very much emotion in here :O
Nic job dude.
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Awesome! I like the way you used different types of metaphors and language :D
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Kelbunk wrote: it sounds like the kind of song thatd sound truly great if it were sang with like..an acoustic instrumental part.
That's what I thought :P


And it's really good. I actually liked the end of the first verse :P
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thank you all soo much! i reallyyyy appreciate all the compliments :smile: :smile:
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