I Know You Like It

[withchappedlips]

My friend wrote this song for our band, and I want to know what you guys think. If you could help us out with it, it would be cool. The end of the song I did... the bridge / the final lyrics. The rest was him. It's still rough... but it's good. My interpretation is that he wrote it about a girl he slept with, and now can't stop thinking about. She has a boyfriend, but she wants it as bad as him. By the end, he lets his lust get the best of him, and she does too. He is quick to think that it's love. It's a prelude to another song.



The phone rings, it's you
2 missed calls
I know it's you, Oh I know it's you
You want more

You say you need him
But I know you want me
It was just once
But this is supposed to be

I know you like it
The taste, the touch
The feel the fuck
You just can't get enough

You're still with him
and you need me
This love's so real
Hit the lights, let's start this
But you're with him

You wake up, he's gone
This game's still far from won
I know you're the one
The one I want to hold
I'm alone in this cold dark room
Waiting for that call
I hear a noise from the hall
I see a shadow at the door

I know you like it
The taste, the touch
The feel, the fuck
You just can't get enough

No, not enough
Of me, and what's meant to be
This phone, it rings
It rings, it rings
You're waiting for me
So let's just breathe
We can't do this anymore
But I can't stop this anymore

I know you like it
The taste, the touch
The feel, the fuck
You just can't get enough

You need me, oh
This love's so real
Hit the lights
Let's start this
Hit the lights
Let's start this

[Hentaiman]

Its really nice, doesn't seem like a usual song structure though.

[budgie]

"The feel, the fuck"???? :O

[withchappedlips]

Its really nice, doesn't seem like a usual song structure though.

I know.
I'm going to fix it up more before it's done.

[spreyye]

[withchappedlips]

/fail.

[PunkSteve]

its good.. nice short & sharp lines, it'll make the song memorable :)

[Peterr]

its good.. nice short & sharp lines, it'll make the song memorable :)

your ass is so banned

[turtlehobopirate]

Cool song