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lmk what you think, its my first original song on the electric ( i think i did better strumming too!)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qj8U_96_I_A

lyrics
verse 1:
I don't wanna make this up to you
I don't ever want to end this fued
Its not like you can tell me what to do

I don't wanna try to work things out
You'll never understand what its all about
I'll never listen to you for crying out loud

Chorus:
So Go Ahead
Point your finger at me
So Go Ahead
You're to blind to see
So Go Ahead
And keep on lying
So Go Ahead
And say what you belive

verse 2:
I don't wanna wave a white flag of truce
You'll never comprehend all the abuse
Its not like you gave me an option to choose

I don't wanna hold up a peace sign
I'm done trying to figure out why
Its not like my memory will fade in due time

Bridge:
So stop screaming - I don't wanna hear anymore
So stop knocking - Cause I won't answer the door
So stop the bleeding - Cause my heart's to dry to pour

yeah its pretty good. great for it being your first!
i found that the guitar part got a little repetative though, i think you should try adding some lead guitar stuff. that would make it really sound cool. it was still catchy though, i mean the melody is still kind of echoing in my head
the lyrics are friggen kickass! i didn't hear it very well in the song unfortunatly, you might want to get a better quality recorder.
what do you record with?

ya its pretty good

xmarryxx wrote:yeah its pretty good. great for it being your first!
i found that the guitar part got a little repetative though, i think you should try adding some lead guitar stuff. that would make it really sound cool. it was still catchy though, i mean the melody is still kind of echoing in my head
the lyrics are friggen kickass! i didn't hear it very well in the song unfortunatly, you might want to get a better quality recorder.
what do you record with?

Yeah, that's basically what I thought of it too.

you're a chick?!?!!

sweet song.

NoReason27 wrote:you're a chick?!?!!

sweet song.

Cuz you know, Heather IS a chick's name.

i never look at part..

It's really awesome for a first song, you did better strumming this time for sure, and you have a great voice too, not to mention the catchy lyrics that you wrote.

Buttom line is: you have the full backage, keep practicing, and you WILL make it.
Also: thanks for being my n00b.

NoReason27 wrote:you're a chick?!?!!

OMFG I HAD NO IDEA!!!!

good song btw

guitar pretty repitive tho....see if u can add drums

Love it. Keep goin'

thanks guys!!! means a lot that you listened to it
its not my first song, just my first on the electric, I wrote on acoustic before

I record with a digital camera, so its the best i can do at the moment. later on I may get some software so I can add drums and such.

MADJID I am proud to be your noob!

And yeah I'm a chick..lol

great song, you are good

sounds awesome..and your voice sounds hawt