lmk what you think, its my first original song on the electric ( i think i did better strumming too!)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qj8U_96_I_A
lyrics
verse 1:
I don't wanna make this up to you
I don't ever want to end this fued
Its not like you can tell me what to do
I don't wanna try to work things out
You'll never understand what its all about
I'll never listen to you for crying out loud
Chorus:
So Go Ahead
Point your finger at me
So Go Ahead
You're to blind to see
So Go Ahead
And keep on lying
So Go Ahead
And say what you belive
verse 2:
I don't wanna wave a white flag of truce
You'll never comprehend all the abuse
Its not like you gave me an option to choose
I don't wanna hold up a peace sign
I'm done trying to figure out why
Its not like my memory will fade in due time
Bridge:
So stop screaming - I don't wanna hear anymore
So stop knocking - Cause I won't answer the door
So stop the bleeding - Cause my heart's to dry to pour
original song - pretty sweet
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
yeah its pretty good. great for it being your first!
i found that the guitar part got a little repetative though, i think you should try adding some lead guitar stuff. that would make it really sound cool. it was still catchy though, i mean the melody is still kind of echoing in my head
the lyrics are friggen kickass! i didn't hear it very well in the song unfortunatly, you might want to get a better quality recorder.
what do you record with?
i found that the guitar part got a little repetative though, i think you should try adding some lead guitar stuff. that would make it really sound cool. it was still catchy though, i mean the melody is still kind of echoing in my head
the lyrics are friggen kickass! i didn't hear it very well in the song unfortunatly, you might want to get a better quality recorder.
what do you record with?
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
ya its pretty good
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
Yeah, that's basically what I thought of it too.xmarryxx wrote:yeah its pretty good. great for it being your first!
i found that the guitar part got a little repetative though, i think you should try adding some lead guitar stuff. that would make it really sound cool. it was still catchy though, i mean the melody is still kind of echoing in my head
the lyrics are friggen kickass! i didn't hear it very well in the song unfortunatly, you might want to get a better quality recorder.
what do you record with?
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
you're a chick?!?!! 
sweet song.
sweet song.
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Cuz you know, Heather IS a chick's name.NoReason27 wrote:you're a chick?!?!!
sweet song.
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
i never look at part..
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
It's really awesome for a first song, you did better strumming this time for sure, and you have a great voice too, not to mention the catchy lyrics that you wrote.
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
OMFG I HAD NO IDEA!!!!NoReason27 wrote:you're a chick?!?!!
good song btw
guitar pretty repitive tho....see if u can add drums
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
Love it. Keep goin'
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
thanks guys!!! means a lot that you listened to it
its not my first song, just my first on the electric, I wrote on acoustic before
I record with a digital camera, so its the best i can do at the moment. later on I may get some software so I can add drums and such.
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And yeah I'm a chick..lol
its not my first song, just my first on the electric, I wrote on acoustic before
I record with a digital camera, so its the best i can do at the moment. later on I may get some software so I can add drums and such.
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And yeah I'm a chick..lol
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Re: original song - pretty sweet
sounds awesome..and your voice sounds hawt
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