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My new jam

Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:13 am
by WillySpleen
itttttss :wordyo:

...this one is for u jonothon....

JB
cant u see
tht u the one for me
maybe
someday ull b wit me
but ino
tht we can never b
cuz baby
u know
i cant pay ur fee

[Chorus]
todaaaaaaaaaaaaay
ino u so close but u feel so far awaaaaaay haaaaaay
i get turned on [or r ] (as a background vocal) by everything u say hay(credited to upperclasszero)
bc baby u kno every kiss begins with kaaaay hay

Why u gotta make me go thru all this
all these punk-ass motha fuking lyrics i spit
fuk this, u kno i cant wait forever
baby u kno tht thers only one real answer
ITS U AND ME, BITCH, NOW OR NEVER

(guitar solo)

[Chorus]

You make me wanna beat ur sorry ass up and down the street
im gunna keep goin till i stop ur fukin heartbeat
ull think im a motha fukin i
when i show u absolutely no fukin mercy

[Chorus]

now ur gone, y didnt u jus give in
it seems now they gotta alert all family, friends and kin
ill jus get another glass of tonic water and gin
forget it all, start over, and chalk up another win

Re: My new jam

Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:27 am
by kevmaster
whats this?

Re: My new jam

Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 5:22 pm
by WillySpleen
kevmaster wrote:whats this?
a love song

Re: My new jam

Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:49 pm
by xmarryxx
it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!

Re: My new jam

Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:07 pm
by WillySpleen
xmarryxx wrote:it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
thank you
ya its a rapcore song, and i havnt rele written any music for it yet but when i do the guitar solo will b a lil later :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro:

Re: My new jam

Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 10:42 pm
by upperclasszero
WillySpleen wrote:
xmarryxx wrote:it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
thank you
ya its a rapcore song, and i havnt rele written any music for it yet but when i do the guitar solo will b a lil later :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro:
what do you mean you are writing the music, im the one who is writing the music

Re: My new jam

Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2008 2:04 am
by WillySpleen
upperclasszero wrote:
WillySpleen wrote:
xmarryxx wrote:it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
thank you
ya its a rapcore song, and i havnt rele written any music for it yet but when i do the guitar solo will b a lil later :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro:
what do you mean you are writing the music, im the one who is writing the music
no...u r makin it, im gunna write it down :devious:

Re: My new jam

Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2008 3:13 am
by upperclasszero
WillySpleen wrote:
upperclasszero wrote:
WillySpleen wrote:
xmarryxx wrote:it sounds almost like a rap/rock song. is part of it rap? very intresting though. i really like the lyrics.

i have one objection though. i think the guitar solo is a little to early. i think it should be after the second chorus, or something.
but i guess i really don't know cuz i don't know how it would sound.

great job!
thank you
ya its a rapcore song, and i havnt rele written any music for it yet but when i do the guitar solo will b a lil later :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro: :fro:
what do you mean you are writing the music, im the one who is writing the music
no...u r makin it, im gunna write it down :devious:
shut up

Re: My new jam

Posted: Mon Nov 17, 2008 11:52 pm
by WillySpleen
i jus mite

Re: My new jam

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:13 pm
by PunkSteve
haha interesting lyrics, you and me Bitch! lol

i like it :)