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Some People

[Part 1]

This is not the end (No it's not)
I think this is the start
I think this is motion (Slow but still) <----------- THANKS DAN
Not falling apart

I finally woke up (Is this real?)
From wonderful dream
Opened my eyes (Seeing light)
Falling on knees

[Part 2]

I don't know where this road goes (No I don't)
I don't know when it ends
Direction unknown (Heading to nowhere)
Warning signs here and there

Divided we all live here (On our own)
Together always fall
Some people live in cages (And some)
Some people always fall

[Part 3]

Some people always lie
Some people are just greedy
Some people earn more money
Than everyone on streets

We can't choose our family (No we can't)
But we can choose our sides
We can't choose where we live (No we can't)
But we can choose our pride

[Part 4]

Some people live in slums
Some people don't have homes
But they don't cry every night
Like us, when electricity is off

Why people trust in something
That they can't see
Praying won't help us
So stop consume your knees

nice, sounds like something i would have written (mainly because of the use of parentheses)

It's pretty good! I like all the Sum 41ness in it, but I don't mind when people think up their own sounds. However, I've no complaints. This shows how Sum 41 inspires you and inspiration is all you need. Good songs come from either luck, or copying someone else's songs. ;)

Thanks for crediting me.

Not bad, methinks