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I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:06 am
by Rocket41
One Last Try

I tried for you
I did everything I thought I could
We tried to do
Everything that we thought we should
Can't count on you
You did what you thought you should
I miss you too
I did everything I knew I could

Tears fall as another minute goes by
A fake smile has ended this fateful night
The door closes as I begin to wonder why
Can't let this end without one last try

I've been replaced
cuz you did what I thought you would
I can't escape
From the feelings I thought were good
We can't fight
The moments we know were true
I know I'm right
Just wait and you'll see it too

Tears fall as another minute goes by
A fake smile has ended this fateful night
The door closes as I begin to wonder why
Can't let this end without one last try

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:39 pm
by upperclasszero
beastly

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:42 am
by Kano
wow dude i like it the melody is awsome good job

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:41 pm
by Rocket41
thanks man

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:22 pm
by withchappedlips
ohai I-Empire.

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 4:21 am
by LTS
nice

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 11:17 am
by Rocket41
Kyle wrote:ohai I-Empire.
how'd you know it was me :smug:

welcome to shanghai escort

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 6:53 am
by beilwei123

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 2:43 pm
by Bizzy-C92
which way do you guys know the melody.....I can only see the lyrics....

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 4:32 am
by Ericuda
This song would be PEREFECT for the dilema my ex and I have gotten ourselves into if a couple lyrics were just altered a bit.

Re: I suck but I'm gonna give it a try

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 10:10 pm
by PunkSteve
its great. especially for what looks like a 1st attempt.. nice simple lyrics etc :)