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Song Sample

Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 4:57 am
by sprinks41
here's a sample to a song i'm working on. not exactly sure yet, but this will probably end up being the bridge to it. what's anyone think....?

Automatic charismatic, why am I so dramatic?
Forget this shit, fuck it all.
I dont care, take it all.
I cant eat, I cant sleep, I cant breathe, I cant think.
Get back, watch out, I'm about to detonate!

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 1:10 pm
by Madjid
It's very good actually , i can't wait to read the rest.

BTW : the fist line is a lot similar to " Thanks For Nothing" by Sum 41 :

So jaded , frustrated , it's all so complicated.

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 3:30 pm
by wiggs1441
pretty good

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 5:31 pm
by sprinks41
^ ^ thank you both :smile:

Re: Replete world of warcraft gold

Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2008 8:06 pm
by sprinks41
ghij353 wrote:Replete with nightworld of warcraft gold
elves, Orcs and dwarves, Worldworld of warcraft gold
of Warcraft is set in a fantasyworld of warcraft gold
world not unlike Tolkien's Lordworld of warcraft gold
Of The Rings.
what the hell does this have to do with my song sample???

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:36 pm
by Stevo32jr.
I have to say those are amazing lyrics

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:38 am
by sprinks41
Stevo32jr. wrote:I have to say those are amazing lyrics
thank you. read the finished version of that song lol it's called "Prodigal Son"

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 9:46 pm
by PunkSteve
hehe 'Fuck it all' nice, very punk! :D

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 8:09 am
by rubo41
it´s ok...but the "I´m about to detonate" is a Sum 41 lyric....(Hooch)

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 5:18 am
by sprinks41
rubo41 wrote:it´s ok...but the "I´m about to detonate" is a Sum 41 lyric....(Hooch)
i realize that but i didnt steal it from them. and i guarantee they're not the first band to use that line in a song either.

Re: Song Sample

Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 8:32 am
by rubo41
No , yeah, for sure.....I´m the main composser in my band, and sometimes this happens.....

It´s so easy to do something similar to another song...and more with lyrics.