This is a song about a girl with bad breath =/

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This is a song about a girl with bad breath =/

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why oh why do i insist on writing shitty music? oh well...here ya go



She walks through the auditorium
Normal as can be
Then she looks over
And comes up to me
We talk for awhile
Nothing out of the ordinary
Then she faces me
And that’s when things get scary

Her breath stinks
I think she needs a tic tac
Her breath stinks
Because she ate a 3 year old big Mac
Her breath stinks
I really don’t know what to do
Her breath stinks
It smells a lot like poo poo

The lights go down
And the show starts up
She whispers to me again
Now I have the taste of throw up
In my mouth
I really don’t like it
Please get away from me
Your breath smells like dog shit

Her breath stinks
I think she needs a tic tac
Her breath stinks
Because she ate a 3 year old big Mac
Her breath stinks
I really don’t know what to do
Her breath stinks
It smells a lot like poo poo

Finally the show ends
I can go get fresh air
Her breath smelled so bad
It burned off some of my hair
We say our goodbyes
And I head to the car
I can still smell her breath
From afar


Her breath stinks
I think she needs a tic tac
Her breath stinks
Because she ate a 3 year old big mac
Her breath stinks
I really don’t know what to do
Her breath stinks
It smells a lot like poo poo

Her breath stinks
I think she needs a tic tac
Her breath stinks
Because she ate a 3 year old big mac
Her breath stinks
I really don’t know what to do
Her breath stinks
It smells a lot like poo poo
All that I need is time for me to breathe. Dream little dreams that only I believe. Now that I see beyond the light, I'm gonna be, I'll be alright.
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:lol!:
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okey :D
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HAHAAHAH YOU'RE GOOD! :lol:
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iemnaiz wrote:HAHAAHAH YOU'RE GOOD! :lol:


haha thanks
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Hahaha
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Wow, just wow
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Hahaha funny :dance:
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My nomination for lyric of the month.
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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reminds me of early blink 182 music :mrgreen: like depends and does my breath smell?
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Haha yeah it's totally something blink182 would write. good job tho! :smile:
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