This Song Is About a Guy...
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 6:08 am
I apologize for the length. I just finished the first draft of it. It's not that good, but any input on how to change it up helps. It's not very well inspired either, so I don't think it's that good to begin with. I just needed to write something new. It took a lot of time to finish the draft. Lots of different days of thinking. Probably a bad idea, and you can tell when you see the changes in the viewpoints or what not.
We were the air in the night before the storm hit
The life in the grass before it's chopped to bits
Everything we did was golden
Nothing you can say to me will change my views on that
And you changed your mind like the weather in July
I got as sick as a hospital of all the changes
Of all the choices that you made
We could have been what we saw all over the television
I lost my cool, then I lost you
It's obvious the love that we had
Dangerous, I want that so bad
Are you listening to any words that I say?
Are we done and over?
Nothing good ever stays.
I guess I'm too young to fall this hard
But she's got me wrapped in to her wicked heart
With her sexy small body and her bright baby blue eyes
and brunette brown hair that flows in waves and tides
The torn up shirts cut to her size
and a voice that flies
through my head like an ambulance siren
Or cop cars, chasing a villain
It's obvious the love that we had
Dangerous, I want that so bad
Are you listening to any words that I say?
Are we done and over?
Nothing good ever stays.
And we will last as long as you stay
Stay with me today
And when I wake up I won't see your face
I'll wish for more
I'll wish for less than 12 months ago
I'll wish for less than 12 months of pain
I'll wish for anything that I can get that involves you
And me, and now.
You and me and now
You and me and now
You and me and now
You and me and now
...
It's obvious the love that we had
Dangerous, I want that so bad
Are you listening to any words that I say?
Are we done and over?
Nothing good ever stays.
You and me and now
I need you and me and now
I need you and me and now
I need you and me and now
I need you and me and now
I need you and me and now
We were the air in the night before the storm hit
The life in the grass before it's chopped to bits
Everything we did was golden
Nothing you can say to me will change my views on that
And you changed your mind like the weather in July
I got as sick as a hospital of all the changes
Of all the choices that you made
We could have been what we saw all over the television
I lost my cool, then I lost you
It's obvious the love that we had
Dangerous, I want that so bad
Are you listening to any words that I say?
Are we done and over?
Nothing good ever stays.
I guess I'm too young to fall this hard
But she's got me wrapped in to her wicked heart
With her sexy small body and her bright baby blue eyes
and brunette brown hair that flows in waves and tides
The torn up shirts cut to her size
and a voice that flies
through my head like an ambulance siren
Or cop cars, chasing a villain
It's obvious the love that we had
Dangerous, I want that so bad
Are you listening to any words that I say?
Are we done and over?
Nothing good ever stays.
And we will last as long as you stay
Stay with me today
And when I wake up I won't see your face
I'll wish for more
I'll wish for less than 12 months ago
I'll wish for less than 12 months of pain
I'll wish for anything that I can get that involves you
And me, and now.
You and me and now
You and me and now
You and me and now
You and me and now
...
It's obvious the love that we had
Dangerous, I want that so bad
Are you listening to any words that I say?
Are we done and over?
Nothing good ever stays.
You and me and now
I need you and me and now
I need you and me and now
I need you and me and now
I need you and me and now
I need you and me and now