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Song I'm writing

Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:42 pm
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
This is a song i just wrote down (not fully finished) it all just started coming to me. tell me what you guys think:

If you comeback to me
I just want you to know
I'm sorry this had to happen
and that we let go

I never wanted this to be
You as just a memory
Now I'm left here on the ground
All alone in this small town
Dreamin big and dying young
When I met you my life begun
I know that I am just a teen
But you were my own beauty queen


And now you're gone

When I said i loved you
I meant every word
I know I made mistakes
and I know i'm immature
(to be this way)


The things we used to do together
Were oh so special to me
The way your hair flowed in the breeze
The way you bring me to my knee's

Now I'm walking all alone
Hearing you fade on the phone
Why's this love turned out to be
Such a faded memory

And now you're gone



When I said i loved you
I meant every word
I know I made mistakes
and I know i'm immature
(to be this way)

And I'm bending to break (bending to break) 4-6x


When I said i loved you
I meant every word
I know I made mistakes
and I know i'm immature
(to be this way)

I don't have a name for it.

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:47 pm
by tomhoppus
Wrong section, but good :cool:

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:50 pm
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
^ this is musicians is it not? :razz:

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:52 pm
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
oh shit.

*see's lyrics section* :lol: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:17 pm
by Peterr
sumfan wrote:oh shit.

*see's lyrics section* :lol: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
:lol!:
I love the song though. How long did it take you?

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 12:04 am
by wiggs1441
good song

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:00 am
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
Buttercup wrote:
sumfan wrote:oh shit.

*see's lyrics section* :lol: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
:lol!:
I love the song though. How long did it take you?
thanks. :smile: (thans wiggles). About 10-20 minutes.

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 2:41 am
by BrandonCorey
Awesome song, for the title why dont u just use fading memorey or fade away

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 4:52 am
by CIRCUITzach
me likey.

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:51 pm
by HilgaMan
CIRCUITzach wrote:me likey.

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 9:22 pm
by kevin5064
i dont like it

Re: Song I'm writing

Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:14 pm
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
kevin5064 wrote:i dont like it
your face.

just kidding :smile: :lol!: