Make Me Hate Me

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Make Me Hate Me

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I wrote this song a LONG time ago. It was written back in winter of 7th grade. It's now summer between 9th and 10th grade. It's a pretty straight-forward song. It's also from back when I had a pretty negative state of mind.

Make Me Hate Me


Coloring my sin with words of hate and vicious sounds.
I cant understand why the world like to hear it.
I wont live this dream, of being another angry soul.
I love you but I cant live this lie, tonight.

Make this faces smile turn upside down,
make this minds love towards life turn around.
I really hope that you will see,
that i just want to hate you and me

My life is swirling up, around.
I wish my life was going out and down.
Why wont this silence turn into rage.
Someone put me in it and close the cage.
Someone hate me, someone kill me.

Make this faces smile turn upside down,
make this minds love towards life turn around.
i really hope that you will see,
that i just want to hate you and me


Make me hate me. Make me hate me. Make me hate me. Make me hate me. Make me hate me.
Act like you care for just one day. Act like you care for just one day. Act like you care for just one day.


Make this faces smile turn upside down,
make this minds love towards life turn around.
i really hope that you will see,
that i just want to hate you and me
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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I can tell you were down when you wrote it
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nicee :twisted:
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hardcoresexfan wrote:I can tell you were down when you wrote it
I was. I had drifted away from my best friend that I talked to the year before 24/7. She was getting really popular and I had taken upon a new little name tag as the "emo" kid. I was still cool with everyone, and had a lot of friends... but I felt really out of place in there because it felt like my best friend was too cool to talk to me and I was just lame. Since then we have become really good friends again, and I would say she's one of my best friends still.
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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its ok not huge on it but its ok
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solid lyrics
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Thanks for the input.

Also, 400th post. I pwn.
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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it sounds like Rape Me by Nirvana :lol!: what ?? Rape me is a fuckin cool song :smug:
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kanguv41 wrote:it sounds like Rape Me by Nirvana :lol!: what ?? Rape me is a fuckin cool song :smug:
I have never heard that resemblance.
Wow. Weird.
I definitely wasn't a listener of Nirvana back when I wrote the song.
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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Its a nice song. i can really feel the feelings you had when you wrote it, strong lyrics i guess :wink:
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It sucks.
It took like 5 minutes.
It was back when I listened to a lot of bands like The Used, My Chemical Romance, AFI, etc.
A lot of bands I now can't stand.
I just posted it because I found it in "My Documents" and I was lol'ing.

I'd post a newer lyric, but nobody would understand it & I would have trouble explaining what I was trying to say in the song. That's why I post crappy old ones to laugh at.

My newest one that I posted on here is titled "When Your Ship Sinks, I Hope I'm On It", and that's the one you should check out.
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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