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King of Controversy

Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 10:57 pm
by sprinks41
i finished this song recently. it's all about me and the fact that i have OCD, so it deals with how i suffer from it in some ways. hope you like it.

"King of Controversy"

Verse 1
My mind is a never-ending dead-end
Something even I will never comprehend
Racing toward nowhere constantly
I've lost all of my self-pity
Is this the beginning or the middle, 'cause there never is an end
No matter what happens the nightmare starts all over again
Why is there no way to break free
from this paradise of misery
Like a one-lane highway, it's the same old path
No matter what I pass, I can never go back

Chorus
All the pill popping, disaster's not stopping
Maybe it would work if I overdosed
I can't imagine a miracle would happen
Nonstop thinking and I never come close
Everyone knows me as the king of controversy
Is it too late, 'cause I can't think straight
Please God help me

Verse 2
Face my fears in the mirror of conflict
Why do I take thoughts and make them so hectic
I come to find that the reflection is me
Well what do you know, I'm my own worst enemy
Can't move forward, so I try to go back
But all that does is repeat the attack
I'm in over my head and down under my feet
Is this really my life or just some crazy dream
Between fact and fiction is nothing but a void
And I fill the space because I'm paranoid

(Chorus)

Bridge
Why do I, always find my mind, in the lost and found
I listen but I never hear a sound
Can't hear my conscience, just the loud silence
Does nobody care that I'm in this nightmare
I'm drowning in doubt, is there a way out
Surrounded by confusion, I need a disillusion
Why am I this way, why am I me
I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree

Chorus
All the pill popping, disaster's not stopping
Maybe it would work if I overdosed
I can't imagine a miracle would happen
Nonstop thinking and I never come close
Everyone knows me as the king of controversy
Is it too late, 'cause I can't think straight
Please God help me
All the pill popping, disaster's not stopping
(My thoughts are intruding)
Maybe it would work if I overdosed
(There's nothing I'm proving)
I can't imagine a miracle would happen
(My actions are draggin')
Nonstop thinking and I never come close
(I fell off the wagon)
Everyone knows me as the king of controversy
(I have no more itches)
Is it too late, 'cause I can't think straight
('Cause I burned all my bridges)
Please God help me

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 11:21 pm
by Mr. Maker
whats this song called... "king of contradiction" ahha jk :lol:
nice song, powerful lyrics and chorus

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 11:28 pm
by sprinks41
McLovin wrote:whats this song called... "king of contradiction" ahha jk :lol:
nice song, powerful lyrics and chorus
hahaha!! yea man i knew as soon as i thought of the name that some people would bring up King of Contradiction somehow lmao!!
but anyway, thanks for compliment, glad you enjoyed the song

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 11:30 pm
by Peterr
Deep and awsome song :smile:

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 12:32 am
by BrandonCorey
Man I love this song! it's great. I love your writing style, i try to write like this but I usually fail. When I read the title I thought it was gonna be some lame lyrics someone wrote about absolutely nothing but this is awesome! keep up the good work.

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 1:55 am
by Gibsum 41
loved it.

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 2:08 am
by Dylan
Gibsum 41 wrote:loved it.

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 2:09 am
by tomhoppus
:surprised: :shock: :grin:

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 4:10 am
by sprinks41
BrandonCorey wrote:Man I love this song! it's great. I love your writing style, i try to write like this but I usually fail. When I read the title I thought it was gonna be some lame lyrics someone wrote about absolutely nothing but this is awesome! keep up the good work.
thanks a lot dude! :smile: i really appreciate that.
dont put yourself down, i have a lot of trouble with writing too sometimes. just keep trying. listen to some songs you like to get some ideas

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 11:52 am
by Kano
oh no im being upstaged *runs and crys*

ur realy good man keep it up!

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 6:00 pm
by sprinks41
Kano wrote:oh no im being upstaged *runs and crys*

ur realy good man keep it up!
thanks i appreciate that :grin:

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 8:27 am
by Kano
sprinks41 wrote:
Kano wrote:oh no im being upstaged *runs and crys*

ur realy good man keep it up!
thanks i appreciate that :grin:
no prob post more of your stuff if u want becuase i think u only get good feed back
:grin:

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 4:40 pm
by sprinks41
Kano wrote:
sprinks41 wrote:
Kano wrote:oh no im being upstaged *runs and crys*

ur realy good man keep it up!
thanks i appreciate that :grin:
no prob post more of your stuff if u want becuase i think u only get good feed back
:grin:
yea it seems like it :smile: maybe i will

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 9:10 pm
by withchappedlips
I was thinking about attempting a good flame at you for the title, but the song backs it up... so i wont.

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 5:38 am
by sprinks41
Kyle_ftl wrote:I was thinking about attempting a good flame at you for the title, but the song backs it up... so i wont.
because it sounds like a rip-off of King of Contradiction? lol i knew ppl would pick up on that

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 11:17 am
by Hentaiman
Wow the lyrics are fuckin' powerful. pretty sweet song, dude, keep it up :D

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 4:59 pm
by sprinks41
Hentaiman wrote:Wow the lyrics are fuckin' powerful. pretty sweet song, dude, keep it up :D
cool thanks a lot man :smile:

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:35 pm
by the perfect li e
With this kinda lyrics I can honestly imagine you on stage singin it! hehe
Truly AMAZING and I don't say that alot I mean this just blew my mind it's awsome! :smile:

Keep it up! :smile:

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 11:57 pm
by tomhoppus

Re: King of Controversy

Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 4:06 pm
by HilgaMan
Wow this is amazing! :shock: These are the best lyrics of all songs that are posted here I think! :)