King of Controversy

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King of Controversy

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i finished this song recently. it's all about me and the fact that i have OCD, so it deals with how i suffer from it in some ways. hope you like it.

"King of Controversy"

Verse 1
My mind is a never-ending dead-end
Something even I will never comprehend
Racing toward nowhere constantly
I've lost all of my self-pity
Is this the beginning or the middle, 'cause there never is an end
No matter what happens the nightmare starts all over again
Why is there no way to break free
from this paradise of misery
Like a one-lane highway, it's the same old path
No matter what I pass, I can never go back

Chorus
All the pill popping, disaster's not stopping
Maybe it would work if I overdosed
I can't imagine a miracle would happen
Nonstop thinking and I never come close
Everyone knows me as the king of controversy
Is it too late, 'cause I can't think straight
Please God help me

Verse 2
Face my fears in the mirror of conflict
Why do I take thoughts and make them so hectic
I come to find that the reflection is me
Well what do you know, I'm my own worst enemy
Can't move forward, so I try to go back
But all that does is repeat the attack
I'm in over my head and down under my feet
Is this really my life or just some crazy dream
Between fact and fiction is nothing but a void
And I fill the space because I'm paranoid

(Chorus)

Bridge
Why do I, always find my mind, in the lost and found
I listen but I never hear a sound
Can't hear my conscience, just the loud silence
Does nobody care that I'm in this nightmare
I'm drowning in doubt, is there a way out
Surrounded by confusion, I need a disillusion
Why am I this way, why am I me
I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree

Chorus
All the pill popping, disaster's not stopping
Maybe it would work if I overdosed
I can't imagine a miracle would happen
Nonstop thinking and I never come close
Everyone knows me as the king of controversy
Is it too late, 'cause I can't think straight
Please God help me
All the pill popping, disaster's not stopping
(My thoughts are intruding)
Maybe it would work if I overdosed
(There's nothing I'm proving)
I can't imagine a miracle would happen
(My actions are draggin')
Nonstop thinking and I never come close
(I fell off the wagon)
Everyone knows me as the king of controversy
(I have no more itches)
Is it too late, 'cause I can't think straight
('Cause I burned all my bridges)
Please God help me
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whats this song called... "king of contradiction" ahha jk :lol:
nice song, powerful lyrics and chorus
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McLovin wrote:whats this song called... "king of contradiction" ahha jk :lol:
nice song, powerful lyrics and chorus
hahaha!! yea man i knew as soon as i thought of the name that some people would bring up King of Contradiction somehow lmao!!
but anyway, thanks for compliment, glad you enjoyed the song
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Deep and awsome song :smile:
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Man I love this song! it's great. I love your writing style, i try to write like this but I usually fail. When I read the title I thought it was gonna be some lame lyrics someone wrote about absolutely nothing but this is awesome! keep up the good work.
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loved it.
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Gibsum 41 wrote:loved it.
you have far too much time on your hands

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BrandonCorey wrote:Man I love this song! it's great. I love your writing style, i try to write like this but I usually fail. When I read the title I thought it was gonna be some lame lyrics someone wrote about absolutely nothing but this is awesome! keep up the good work.
thanks a lot dude! :smile: i really appreciate that.
dont put yourself down, i have a lot of trouble with writing too sometimes. just keep trying. listen to some songs you like to get some ideas
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oh no im being upstaged *runs and crys*

ur realy good man keep it up!
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Kano wrote:oh no im being upstaged *runs and crys*

ur realy good man keep it up!
thanks i appreciate that :grin:
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sprinks41 wrote:
Kano wrote:oh no im being upstaged *runs and crys*

ur realy good man keep it up!
thanks i appreciate that :grin:
no prob post more of your stuff if u want becuase i think u only get good feed back
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Kano wrote:
sprinks41 wrote:
Kano wrote:oh no im being upstaged *runs and crys*

ur realy good man keep it up!
thanks i appreciate that :grin:
no prob post more of your stuff if u want becuase i think u only get good feed back
:grin:
yea it seems like it :smile: maybe i will
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I was thinking about attempting a good flame at you for the title, but the song backs it up... so i wont.
And I know I said I needed space,

but I know I can't be comfortable in my own skin.

So when I say I'm scared to be alone, you know I mean it,

I'm just not ready to leave my room.

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Kyle_ftl wrote:I was thinking about attempting a good flame at you for the title, but the song backs it up... so i wont.
because it sounds like a rip-off of King of Contradiction? lol i knew ppl would pick up on that
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Wow the lyrics are fuckin' powerful. pretty sweet song, dude, keep it up :D
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Hentaiman wrote:Wow the lyrics are fuckin' powerful. pretty sweet song, dude, keep it up :D
cool thanks a lot man :smile:
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With this kinda lyrics I can honestly imagine you on stage singin it! hehe
Truly AMAZING and I don't say that alot I mean this just blew my mind it's awsome! :smile:

Keep it up! :smile:
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ConeBizzy32 wrote:
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Wow this is amazing! :shock: These are the best lyrics of all songs that are posted here I think! :)
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