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NEW SONG yes another i like this song its got a very slow begining and speeds up near the end yeh wat u think

its called Im Over You

Im Over You

Cause im over you
And theres nothing you can do
But try to take back the mistakes
I no you tried
To not hurt me
But deep down inside
You did…

Have you ever thought
I would die for you (die for you)
Did you ever think
You led me on (led me on)
And I chose to forgive you (forgive you)
Witch was the biggest mistake of my life…

Im not joking or making a mockery
This time I mean it im over you (over you)
You just lead me on
And on and on
And over and over
Till sunk to a new low….

C’mon now you cant say that you cared
That you tried to make it better
Cause im hurt inside
And it aint gunna fix

Cause im over you
And theres nothing you can do
But try to take back the mistakes
I no you tried
To not hurt me
But deep down inside
You did…

Ive relised you don’t care
So im moving on
To that girl who was always there
She might be taken
But I ill find a way

(solo)

(piano)

im over you……….
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Wow great song! nice! :grin:
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Post by King of Contradiction »

Kano wrote:Witch was the biggest mistake of my life…
Ok i forgave many punctuation mistakes but come on.. witch? I assume you mean 'which'.

Aside from that good song, keep up the good work!
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I like it :)
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Best one i've read in the forum :cool:
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sweet :mrgreen:
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King of Contradiction wrote:
Kano wrote:Witch was the biggest mistake of my life…
Ok i forgave many punctuation mistakes but come on.. witch? I assume you mean 'which'.

Aside from that good song, keep up the good work!
lol i dont worry bout spelling when i right maby i should lol
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