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a chorus i wrote

Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:24 am
by erikj9
Just a chorus thinking of verses still.


My life is gold
Fuck the whole world, I know
This is getting too old
for me, Why can't we
Make peace not war
Fuck the whole world, I'm sore
this is getting too hard
for me, Why can't we
live a life
perfectly

Yes, i wrote this when i was in a very pissed off mood

Re: a chorus i wrote

Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 5:21 am
by dearyou_182
oo erik you poet.
i like alot, very BCR :smug:

Re: a chorus i wrote

Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 2:18 pm
by J-Pan
nice but really needs a verse