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Posted: **Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:09 am**

So its been a long time since i wrote anything lyrically. I just came up with this, along with a slowish fastish tune for it.

Call me up one Saturday evening
The taste of Gin upon my breath
Telling Me You Don't care about me
How am i supposed to pay the rent

(musical part)

In this song you can find my feelings
In this song you can find my hate
All alone staring at the ceiling
Time goes by and now its too late

thats all i got so far, but im making it a short song so there wont be much more. if i don't crap this, soon i'll be posting the musical part too.

*waits for boos*

Posted: **Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:21 am**

hey that's pretty good man.

there was a sense of rhythm all the way through, and it wasn't typical rhyming either, i like it.

DEFO post the music soon :D

Posted: **Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:57 am**

ToMaTaN wrote:hey that's pretty good man.

there was a sense of rhythm all the way through, and it wasn't typical rhyming either, i like it.

Posted: **Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:16 pm**

thanks! :D

Posted: **Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:15 pm**

ToMaTaN wrote:hey that's pretty good man.

there was a sense of rhythm all the way through, and it wasn't typical rhyming either, i like it.

DEFO post the music soon :D

Posted: **Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:42 pm**

that is actually pretty damn good man. it flows fluently throughout the whole song

Posted: **Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:59 pm**

Thats pretty good!

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