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No Heart

Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 8:46 pm
by sprinks41
this is a song i finally finished called "No Heart." it took me about 3 months to write, so i'm glad is officially done. it's a very political song (i dont like politics); however, regardless of what some of the lyrics say, please do NOT think that i dislike America, because that's not the case. i love and live in America. this song is supposed to be anti-politics/politicians, not anti-America. comments are appreciated, thanks.

"No Heart"

Verse 1
All of these choices, not one is open-minded
No sense of direction, completely misguided
We're led straight down a crooked line
Destination unknown, all the leaders are blind
Dressed from head to toe, they're the heads of the masquerade
And nothing more than puppets in the parade
It all ends the same so what's the use?
We wanna believe but there's no truth
We feel no pride, nothing but shame
And don't go pointing fingers, we all know who's to blame

Chorus
Cross no heart, believe no soul
Everything is backwards and it's out of their control
Under God they're sworn to protect
With bogus alibis and total disrespect
Every decision, constant error
Nothing is safe in this world of terror

Verse 2
We opened Pandora's Box and all the demons ran amok
If we had kept it locked would we've had better luck?
They see pride in our catastrophe
Is this all a fact or is it just me?
I was burning a flag and the fire turned red
The devil himself appeared and this is what he said
"There was a time when below was the worst place to be,
but America has proven me wrong as far as I can see"
Take a look around and you'll see nothing but misery
That's all that's left after their constant debauchery

(Chorus)

Bridge part 1
I pledge allegiance to the flag, of the Divided States of Embarrassment, and to the confusion for which it stands, one joke under God, undependable, with anxiety and negligence for all

part 2
Same old story all the time
They want our blessing, they won't get mine
Look us in the eyes, fill our heads with lies
A heartbreak of bliss, like our trust's apocalypse
We can't take much more of this
Why do we believe those who just deceive?
Why pray for incline when it's always a descent?
That's why I've always been antiestablishment

Chorus
Cross no heart, believe no soul (They never do their part)
Everything is backwards and it's out of their control (This nation is falling apart)
Under God they're sworn to protect (Ripping at the seams)
With bogus alibis and total disrespect (From all their evil schemes)
Every decision, constant error (Nothing can catch us from the fall)
Nothing is safe in this world of terror (Maybe there's no God after all)

Re: No Heart

Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:25 pm
by wiggs1441
its good.

Re: No Heart

Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 10:43 pm
by Peterr
wiggs1441 wrote:its good.
I kinda heard it in somewhat of a tune with count your last blessings...

Re: No Heart

Posted: Wed Apr 16, 2008 10:52 pm
by wiggs1441
did you get the bridge from march of the dogs.

Re: No Heart

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 12:11 am
by sprinks41
wiggs1441 wrote:its good. did you get the bridge from march of the dogs.
thanks. and no, the tune from march of the dogs never entered my mind

Re: No Heart

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 1:43 am
by wiggs1441
sprinks41 wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:its good. did you get the bridge from march of the dogs.
thanks. and no, the tune from march of the dogs never entered my mind
oo. cause it reminded me of it.

Re: No Heart

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 10:49 am
by ToMaTaN
i really like that man, that's awesome!

do you have the music written for it?

Re: No Heart

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 7:02 pm
by sprinks41
ToMaTaN wrote:i really like that man, that's awesome!

do you have the music written for it?
thank you :D no sorry i dont. even if i did, i have no way to record it and put it online

Re: No Heart

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:05 pm
by ToMaTaN
sprinks41 wrote:
ToMaTaN wrote:i really like that man, that's awesome!

do you have the music written for it?
thank you :D no sorry i dont. even if i did, i have no way to record it and put it online
s'cool, it just seemed so well written that i thought it would have had to have been written with a tune already

Re: No Heart

Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:42 pm
by sprinks41
ToMaTaN wrote:
sprinks41 wrote:
ToMaTaN wrote:i really like that man, that's awesome!

do you have the music written for it?
thank you :D no sorry i dont. even if i did, i have no way to record it and put it online
s'cool, it just seemed so well written that i thought it would have had to have been written with a tune already
nope nothing. just lyrics. thank you very much though, i appreciate it

Re: No Heart

Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:06 am
by Hentaiman
Yeah its great, dude.

Kinda sounds to me like a mix of March of the Dogs and Pull the Curtain haha but still its really cool.

Re: No Heart

Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 3:43 am
by sprinks41
Hentaiman wrote:Yeah its great, dude.

Kinda sounds to me like a mix of March of the Dogs and Pull the Curtain haha but still its really cool.
haha wow interesting combo. thanks though :D

Re: No Heart

Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:13 am
by tomhoppus
its fucking ace! I like it. I could see it having a sound like CYLB

Re: No Heart

Posted: Sat Apr 19, 2008 10:17 pm
by sprinks41
tomhoppus wrote:its fucking ace! I like it. I could see it having a sound like CYLB
thanks dude, i appreciate it :]