help!

[BrandonCorey]

Yea so I wrote this song a while ago, it's nothing special. Anyway I need some help with the guitar part. I can't quite find the right sound. Just read the song and see what kind of melody do you think would go good, tell me if you think it should be fast or slow. If you can, give me like some chord progressions that would go good or what kind of guitar part would be appropriat for this song.:


I’m slowly drifting far away
I’m more alone every day
Soon I will be in solitude
In this room, without you

Two weeks left until the time
Not in words I can define
All the feelings I’ll soon face
Fourteen days till the dreaded place

I’m in a plane all alone
Everyone else is way down low
I’m flying higher in the sky
They’re disappearing before my eyes

I’m slowly drifting far away
I’m more alone every day
Soon I will be in solitude
In this room, without you

One week left until the time
Not in words I can define
All the feelings I’ll soon face
Seven days till the dreaded place

I’m losing grasp of all I love
I may need guidance from above
Just to keep my life on it’s path
The one that’s slipping away so fast

I’m slowly drifting far away
I’m more alone every day
Soon I will be in solitude
In this room, without you

One more day until the time
Till the day I’ll be confined
All the feelings I’ll soon face
When I open the door and walk into the place

I have never felt so alone
I have never felt so dethroned
This chapter has come to an end
Perhaps someday we’ll meet again

I’m slowly drifting far away
I’m more alone every day
Soon I will be in solitude
In this room, without you


Note: the chorus is the first stanza thing "I'm slowly drifting far away...."

[wiggs1441]

its all good

[Hentaiman]

Its a very cool song and i'd say a fast rhythm will go great for it, kinda of a fast punk-ish chord progression.

[BrandonCorey]

^ Thanks I needed an opinion on the song