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Send Off Suicide

Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 12:32 am
by Boni
I've been working on a new song
This is the finished version

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Send Off Suicide

Don’t pretend your love for me
Don’t ever lie or talk to me
All alone we lie here waiting
For this to end

But it’s just too late
It’s just too late

I'm not willing
To change for you
Not a fear
She won't pull through
On my own
As we still see
This is your
Send off suicide

Just sit around and think of you
My tears are falling just for you
I'm caught red handed
You found me out

But its too late time is running out
So sing our last lullaby
It’s all gone now time to die
Oh my god I just can't wait

But it’s too late
It’s just too late

I'm not willing
To change for you
Not a fear
She won't pull through
On my own
As we still see
This is your
Send off suicide
 
He’ll see you soon
At least he’ll try
But I dunno when it’s gonna be
When you go you turn up
But you keep asking but we don’ know

I'm not willing
To change for you
Not a fear
She won't pull through
On my own
As we still see
This is your
Send off suicide

Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!
Send off suicide!

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EDIT: I finished the lyrics, what you guys think?

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 1:34 am
by Peterr
Not a bad start :)

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 2:00 pm
by wiggs1441
make it a bit longer

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:42 pm
by 41salute
wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
Shut up. Stop talking to him like he's ur boyfriend.

Pretty good, man. I like the ''we're all fucked'' vibe. :D

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 6:34 pm
by tomhoppus
41salute wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
Shut up. Stop talking to him like he's ur boyfriend.

Pretty good, man. I like the ''we're all fucked'' vibe. :D
You shut the fuck up dickface. He has never talked to him like boni is his boyfriend before. So fuck of cuntface.

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:13 pm
by Gibsum 41
tomhoppus wrote:
41salute wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
Shut up. Stop talking to him like he's ur boyfriend.

Pretty good, man. I like the ''we're all fucked'' vibe. :D
You shut the fuck up dickface. He has never talked to him like boni is his boyfriend before. So fuck of cuntface.
i think it was a joke dude. you know "make it a bit LONGER"

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:54 am
by wiggs1441
lol

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 4:15 pm
by 41salute
tomhoppus wrote: You shut the fuck up dickface. He has never talked to him like boni is his boyfriend before. So fuck of cuntface.
Calm down. Of course, it was a joke. I don't know the guy. I'm not trying to offend hin or mock him. I'm just trying to make my interweb experience a little funnier(for me).

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 4:34 pm
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
tomhoppus wrote:
41salute wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
Shut up. Stop talking to him like he's ur boyfriend.

Pretty good, man. I like the ''we're all fucked'' vibe. :D
You shut the fuck up dickface. He has never talked to him like boni is his boyfriend before. So fuck of cuntface.
Alpha male much?


:lol: :roll:

Re: Untitled Song

Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:04 pm
by Boni
wiggs1441 wrote:make it a bit longer
That's only the first verse, I'm still in the process of writing it down it tends to take me a while to finish.

Re: Send Off Suicide

Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:25 pm
by Boni
That's it finished

What you make of it??

Re: Send Off Suicide

Posted: Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:36 pm
by wiggs1441
nice its longer.

Re: Send Off Suicide

Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 2:15 pm
by K.
not bad but i don't get why do everybody write love songs or broken hearts smt ...

Re: Send Off Suicide

Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 10:48 pm
by Boni
kanguv41 wrote:not bad but i don't get why do everybody write love songs or broken hearts smt ...
This song is about a personal experience of mine, most of them