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Wake Up

Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:01 pm
by Dan
I know my songs have been a bit hit and miss with you guys, but if we ever get round to recording any of these, i'll post them in their lyrics page.
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She dances rhumba on the dancefloor,
but she dont know what it means
she's like to tell you that she loves you
but she's scared of what you'll think,
Shes an ordinary girl,
and making sence of this world,
is not that easy for her,
It's not that easy for her,

She stays up late every night,
Thinking of the words to say,
To ask if you feel right,
and do you feel the same way?
She's an ordinary thing,
Trying so hard to fit in,
Is not that easy for her,
No its not that easy for her,

She said,
Your lying,
Your trying,
I'm sick of your crying,
Your make up,
We break up,
and one day you'll wake up,
A loser,
Your user,
The substance abuser,
So grow up,
and wise up,
and never wake up,

She played a hand in your demise,
For you to believe what she says,
And her head so full of lies,
never ceases to amaze,
shes not what you think you know,
and just playing the dumb show,
its not that easy for her,
not its not that easy for her,

She said,
Your lying,
Your trying,
I'm sick of your crying,
Your make up,
We break up,
and one day you'll wake up,
A loser,
Your user,
The substance abuser,
So grow up,
and wise up,
and never wake up,

*Bridge*

She said,
Your lying,
Your trying,
I'm sick of your crying,
Your make up,
We break up,
and one day you'll wake up,
A loser,
Your user,
The substance abuser,
So grow up,
and wise up,
and never wake up,

Re: Wake Up

Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:23 pm
by Hentaiman
Sorry i didn't like the verses very much but the chorus is freakin' amazing! :o :D

Re: Wake Up

Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:44 pm
by Gibsum 41
Hentaiman wrote:Sorry i didn't like the verses very much but the chorus is freakin' amazing! :o :D

Re: Wake Up

Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:58 pm
by wiggs1441
Hentaiman wrote:Sorry i didn't like the verses very much but the chorus is freakin' amazing! :o :D

Re: Wake Up

Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 11:33 pm
by Peterr
wiggs1441 wrote:
Hentaiman wrote:Sorry i didn't like the verses very much but the chorus is freakin' amazing! :o :D

Re: Wake Up

Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 11:38 pm
by tomhoppus
soccer44151 wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:
Hentaiman wrote:Sorry i didn't like the verses very much but the chorus is freakin' amazing! :o :D

Re: Wake Up

Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 11:47 pm
by ManOverboard
tomhoppus wrote:
soccer44151 wrote:
wiggs1441 wrote:
Hentaiman wrote:Sorry i didn't like the verses very much but the chorus is freakin' amazing! :o :D

Re: Wake Up

Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 3:36 am
by kevz2kool
...wow the post on here so far are so diverse.

i liked the song as a whole. good job!

Re: Wake Up

Posted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:34 am
by Hentaiman
kevz2kool wrote:...wow the post on here so far are so diverse.

i liked the song as a whole. good job!
haha so diverse... yeah :lol: