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I need help for a title

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I need help for a title, This song is kinda based off of Please take me home and First date by blink-182

This song is about a hot girl a year older then me, and I think she likes me........ :smug:

Oh shit is she looking at me?
Please just don't mess up right now
How did this ever come to be
All I want to know is how.......

Come on, Dont go, Please stay with me
This is, The best, night I ever had
You are, The best, that I've ever seen
Get back, stay there, it isnt all that bad

That night when I come home
i go take a cold shower and masturbate
Just please answer the phone
This was the best first date

Come on, Dont go, Please stay with me
This is, The best, night I ever had
You are, The best, that I've ever seen
Get back, stay there, it isnt all that bad

Come On, Dont go, Please stay with me (Stay with me)
This is, The best, night I ever had
You are, The best, that I've ever seen
Get back, stay there, it isnt that bad

Please stay with me!
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Masterbaiting right after a date. LOL.

Isnt that a sign that the date was satisfying enough?

I say you call it With Me. Lol jk, call it Stay With Me.
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Nic wrote:Masterbaiting right after a date. LOL.

Isnt that a sign that the date was satisfying enough?

I say you call it With Me. Lol jk, call it Stay With Me.
:smug: I had Please stay with me as a working title, but all my joke songs start with the letter S

Hmmmmmmmmmmm...........
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Its real nice, but i couldn't really get the structure of it and i was hard to me to find an actual rhythm for it.

hmm you can call it "Don't Go", or "Best First Date" or just "The Best" which kinda suits it cuz you mention "the best" many times in the song.
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Hentaiman wrote:Its real nice, but i couldn't really get the structure of it and i was hard to me to find an actual rhythm for it.

hmm you can call it "Don't Go", or "Best First Date" or just "The Best" which kinda suits it cuz you mention "the best" many times in the song.
Yea, it's kinda hard to get the rythm for this song. Like the first verse and 2nd chorus are different, so thats probably why Thanks for not gonig off topic
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i say you call it master-bait :lol:
you have far too much time on your hands

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how about "It Isn't All That Bad"
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the best with me
tomhoppus is my Master!
NoReason27 is my Grand-master!
BrandonCorey is my N00B!
Sum-42 is my Grand N00B!

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surely you take a cold shower if you dont wanna masturbate...?

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budgie wrote:surely you take a cold shower if you dont wanna masturbate...?

Rapid Hand Movement
:P

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