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Come Back

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:57 pm
by tomhoppus
First song I wrote.... feedback please :D
Why do you deny me in everything I do?
You nag so much I can’t take it
Why don’t you ever encourage me in all that I do?
People who meet you always call you a bitch

Come back, why did you leave me
Come back, can’t you hear me
Come back, why do you question
Come back, and please listen

I don’t doubt you in all that you say
I love you so much but you can’t see
People that I meet don’t call me gay
You run at the sight of puny bee

Come back, why did you leave me
Come back, can’t you hear me
Come back, why do you question
Come back, and please listen

You say you want to break up with me
So you can be free
Just stay together for one more day

Fine!

You say you want to break up with me
So you can be free
Just stay together for one more day

Come back, why did you leave me
Come back, can’t you hear me
Come back, why do you question
Come back, and please listen

Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 5:46 am
by BrandonCorey
Wow that's great for a first song.

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 2:55 am
by tomhoppus
thanks alot of people say that :oops:

ill prolly be making a new song tomorrow

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 2:58 am
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
puny bee?

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:00 am
by tomhoppus
yes, that part is about my older brother :lol: hes frightened of them

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 3:10 am
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
hha nice one. I like it :D

Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:13 pm
by HilgaMan
I actually think that is a very good song. :>