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Untitled

Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 2:12 am
by BrandonCorey
Verse 1
Where do I want to go?
Believe me, I do not know
I can’t help it, I’m just unsure
What my life has in store

Chorus
Who am I supposed to be?
Where do I belong in society?
Look at me, what do you see?
Accomplished goals or shattered dreams?

Verse 2
Am I what you hoped for?
Is this what you expected, or more?
This life is like a mystery
I’m just a victim of reality

Chorus
Who am I supposed to be?
Where do I belong in society?
Look at me, what do you see?
Accomplished goals or shattered dreams?

Verse 3
Am I going in the right direction?
The way to my own perfection
I’m on a journey so I can find
The inner self lost in my mind


Chorus
Who am I supposed to be?
Where do I belong in society?
Look at me, what do you see?
Accomplished goals or shattered dreams?


This is one of my first songs. It's FAR from good but let me know what you think and if you can help me out with some lyrics or a title.

Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:57 am
by Nic
I like. Nice work.

Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 12:04 pm
by BrandonCorey
Thanks alot man. :)

Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:20 pm
by K.
nice job

Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:19 pm
by BrandonCorey
Thanks again.

Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 2:28 am
by Spencer
i like it a lot. its really good and you could have a guitar solo in there and stuff too if you wanted

Re: Untitled

Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:24 am
by Avey41
Hey nice work i love it !!!
you have the same style as me wow seriously u rock :D