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new song

Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 4:36 am
by Byzzy
this song is a song that i started writing like a year ago and it has the same chords that underclass hero has, it's so weird, cuz it has almost the same intro and chorus and verse..
whatever, these are the lyrics:

verse1:
don't really know
what you've ever got
is something
i'm trying to figure it out

i wanna clean up this mess
before it gets too late
you make believe
that i need to grow up

chorus:
you wanted to be friends with god and the devil
but in your way to hell you just lost what you ever got
and there's nothing there to change for what you've done before
i guess you'll realize what you wasted time ago

i haven't finished the song though, but i'm working on it

Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 3:33 pm
by TheGuyWhoLikesToast
wow these lyrics are i don't know awsome.
i wonder what's the song like :)

Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:24 pm
by Hentaiman
Sounds good :)

The first verse will really fit into Underclass Hero's first verse :D
good job :)

Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:09 pm
by Dylan
thje first two lines of the first verse reming me of the opening line to Crazy Amanda Bunkface

Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:23 pm
by Byzzy
is kinda hard to finish it cuz i don't like that girl anymore lol.
but it sounds really cool though

Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 9:08 pm
by Dylan
well you could finish it like that. kinda like a mirrior poem thing. start of likeing her and then finishing off hateing her. kinda like figured you out by Nickelback.

Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 2:04 am
by Byzzy
mm, it'd be kinda short tough. I guess i'll have to finish it eventually lol