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mylifeisratedR
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Untitled Song

Post by mylifeisratedR »

I wrote this song about a long relationship that was really going good in my life and it just came to a screeching halt, and all of a sudden I'm being torn down by the girl i had been with for 9 months. It doesn't have a title, so any suggestions would be welcome.

This has been in my head for so long now
I never meant to say goodbye, now
Let me speak

It's like a nightmare stuck on repeat
You're the one thats tearing me apart
It's like some sort of messed up thought
I can't

Swallow your insults and leave me be
Tell me this is over because I can't feel anything

Look inside of me
What do you see?
Because you left nothing but a
Bleeding wound and shards of me
Look in my eyes
As long as I'm paralyzed
I guess now I'm dead inside that
You'll be just fine
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Post by Dáš »

Nice song :)It could be called such inside of me or time to say it's over.
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