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Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:08 am
by pakiraider
Lately I’m having trouble falling asleep
You race through my mind and it’s keeping me up all night
Out of sound and out of sight
I try to fight the feeling I kept locked up inside
And it’s getting harder to hide, getting harder to hide

Can’t help it
I close my eyes I see you
Ever since we met
I can’t sleep without you
Can’t stop thinking of you
Can’t stop, won’t stop
Even when I’m dreaming

I’m up all night
Thoughts racing through my mind
The wrongs feel so right
As this tangled web starts to unwind
It’s just you and I
Under the Midwest summer sky

Let’s throw everything away
Live life for today
Tomorrow’s never promised

So, don’t listen to them
They’ll tell you this is wrong
Don’t listen to your head
Listen to your heart
And feel mine too
So synchronized
Beating in and out of time
Just for you

Every night without you is so empty
I can feel your shadow besides me
It’s taking my breath away
I keep the lights on for you

I’m up all night
Thoughts racing through my mind
The wrongs feel so right
As this tangled web starts to unwind
It’s just you and I
Under the Midwest summer sky

Ninety-five degrees in the summer
But the heat didn’t bother me when I was with you
Silver 85 Mustang, missing her hair blowing through the air
Going one-oh-five in my drop top

It didn’t get better than that
Two careless kids with nothing to miss
Warm starry nights sharing our first kiss

Now, I’m up all night
Thoughts racing through my mind
The wrongs feel so right
As this tangled web starts to unwind
It’s just you and I
Under the Midwest summer sky

Underneath these stars and moons
I’ve got a feeling deep inside
I’ll be seeing you soon
Until then I’ll be up all night
Cause this is when the wrongs feel so right
And the tangles of this love start to unwind
It’s just you and I
Under the Midwest summer sky
I’ll wait forever, my love

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:39 am
by I'm A Cunt [*banned*]
Really? This is your title?

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:42 am
by pakiraider
lol i couldn't think of anything better! why is the piece bad?

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:51 am
by Peterr
First Blink single is suppose to be called up all night.

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:04 am
by pakiraider
didn't realize that, haven't listened to blink or heard blink news in a while lol. but can you guys actually leave feedback on what you thought of the poem/song?

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:38 am
by Resident Skumfuk
I like it! Good job


P.S .. who cares about Blink :winkwink:

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:00 am
by pakiraider
thank you i appreciate it!

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:40 am
by Madjid
LOL BLINK
I told you guys it was all the for the money, no one believed me.

TYLER41 OMG BLINKZ R AWSUM OMG THEYD NEVER DECEIVE TRUE FANS ZOMGZ!!!1!1!1!
Suck on that.

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:49 am
by pakiraider
yeah i kno, i want as many people to read it as possible, unfortunately none of them really appreciated it idk why tho?

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:57 am
by lisaNL
I don't know why this thread is full of shitty comments but I do like your lyrics. It's good except for this part:

Can’t help it
I close my eyes I see you
Ever since we met
I can’t sleep without you
Can’t stop thinking of you
Can’t stop, won’t stop
Even when I’m dreaming

It's cliché and too simple. If you replace that part with something better I think it would be really good :)

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 2:23 pm
by SumGeek
Peterr wrote:First Blink single is suppose to be called up all night.
This is why I thought when I clicked the link to this thread it was going to be in the music section about the Blink song, haha.
Good lyrics, none the less.

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:55 pm
by pakiraider
thank you everyone for the feedback i appreciate it, nd my bad for the confusion with blink i still don't know how to edit threads lol

Re: Up All Night

Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:55 am
by Bobbyjames
pakiraider wrote:thank you everyone for the feedback i appreciate it, nd my bad for the confusion with blink i still don't know how to edit threads lol
click the EDIT button that's sitting in the top right hand corner of your original post!

and I don't know why people are moaning about the song name, so what if Blink are planning on using it!