new song - thanks for coming out

[JDM13]

just a little something i just scrambled together...

Before us, he fades, into, the night

No body knows, how hard it is
When you’re dead, inside, but still living
Why aren’t I dead?

I don’t wanna sleep tonight
I wanna give up this fight
I wanna see my self fall
I think I might just end it all

Look inside my eyes
See the pain that lies
Look inside my heart
It’s the blackest arc
Not beating for me so why would it for you

I don’t wanna sleep tonight
I wanna give up this fight
I wanna see my self fall
I think I might just end it all


Today, is the day, that it falls apart
And my hands, now they hold, that very last spark

Erase the dark, see the pain, watch it all flow to the brain
Dress the part, what’s my name? can’t go through this again
Erase the dark, see the pain, watch it all flow to the brain
Dress the part, what’s my name? can’t go through this again

This is my last sleep tonight
Looks like I’ve given up the fight
Go and watch me fall
This is me ending it all

So thanks for coming out.

[dirk]

not joking, u r gay?

no problem anyway

[Mitchell]

not joking, u r gay?

no problem anyway

This doesn't make sense at all

[lisaNL]

not joking, u r gay?

no problem anyway

This doesn't make sense at all

I think he's referring to the title. Like coming out as in telling you're gay. xD

[FuckT41182]

it's funny,he posts a song here in hope to get some opinions and the only three people who were sedulous enough to comment on this had written a total bullshit comments .

I like the way the lyrics are written,it's kinda dark and that's just what I like ...

[UltraKolby]

I kinda like it. Its dark, creepy, and likeable

[lisaNL]

FuckT is right, sorry for not giving you any feedback the first time. But about the song, I think it's good. It's dark but I like that :)

[pakiraider]

it's very good i like it!

[dbauer91]

to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve

[PyroAMYac]

to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve

Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/

[JDM13]

to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve

Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/

you probably wont like the new sums album then...

[FuckT41182]

to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve

Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/

you probably wont like the new sums album then...

don't listen to him,if you wanna write pessimistic lyrics,do so,I like it ...I am very optimistic about myself and extremely pessimistic about the world and about other people...everyone likes something different,but look,MCR were writing their lyrics the same way as you did :P

[PyroAMYac]

to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve

Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/

you probably wont like the new sums album then...

I know that it's gonna be darker and I have no problem with that, Blood In My Eyes sounds awesome for example, but I think they're very unlikely to ever suggest suicide - That's not the way they work and there's far too much energy in their songs for that theme.

[FuckT41182]

to be brutally honest, it's really cliche and rhymes such as eyes w/ lies and fight w/ tonight have been used thousands of times. keep working at it though, i'm sure you'll improve

Sorry but I have to agree, it makes me cringe. Can anyone on this site write about something that doesn't invole killing yourself or having a "black heart"? And you wonder where the EMO steroetype comes from... :/

you probably wont like the new sums album then...

I know that it's gonna be darker and I have no problem with that, Blood In My Eyes sounds awesome for example, but I think they're very unlikely to ever suggest suicide - That's not the way they work and there's far too much energy in their songs for that theme.

oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead

[PyroAMYac]

oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead

I think you're kind of missing the point, Smells Like Teen Spirit isn't about suicide either is it. Why, are you suggesting Deryck kill himself? I know you're not really, but do you actually see my point about the songs, I'm not talking about band members killing themselves...

[FuckT41182]

oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead

I think you're kind of missing the point, Smells Like Teen Spirit isn't about suicide either is it. Why, are you suggesting Deryck kill himself? I know you're not really, but do you actually see my point about the songs, I'm not talking about band members killing themselves...

you said that they have too much energy to commit suicide ...and I said that Nirvana was a band full of energy ...

[PyroAMYac]

oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead

I think you're kind of missing the point, Smells Like Teen Spirit isn't about suicide either is it. Why, are you suggesting Deryck kill himself? I know you're not really, but do you actually see my point about the songs, I'm not talking about band members killing themselves...

you said that they have too much energy to commit suicide ...and I said that Nirvana was a band full of energy ...

Correction: I said they have to much energy to drag it down by theming their SONGS about suicide.

[FuckT41182]

oh,there was so much energy in Smells Like Teen Spirit ...and if my memory serves.Kurt still is kinda dead

I think you're kind of missing the point, Smells Like Teen Spirit isn't about suicide either is it. Why, are you suggesting Deryck kill himself? I know you're not really, but do you actually see my point about the songs, I'm not talking about band members killing themselves...

you said that they have too much energy to commit suicide ...and I said that Nirvana was a band full of energy ...

Correction: I said they have to much energy to drag it down by theming their SONGS about suicide.

suicides are cool,you young people have no idea about what's good or bad

[PyroAMYac]

suicides are cool,you young people have no idea about what's good or bad

First of all, since when is suicide cool, and secondly, I'm sorry, when you say "you young people" who the hell are you referring to?

[FuckT41182]

suicides are cool,you young people have no idea about what's good or bad

First of all, since when is suicide cool, and secondly, I'm sorry, when you say "you young people" who the hell are you referring to?

I don't care,give me a break for god's sake I don't give a shit what I write about ...and you are way too serious,you guys need to chill out , Stevo hates you