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My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:05 am
by AdamIFall
Hey guys, I just finished a new song for my band not too long ago, and I was just looking for some feedback or criticism. It starts off kinda slow, but it kicks in. You can hear it on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4rvyfxbHdbo

Thanks so much for listening!

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:14 am
by bizzyd53
I wrote a song just like that. :holyshit:

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:16 am
by AdamIFall
haha really? xD is it posted anywhere online?

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:21 am
by bizzyd53
nope.

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:26 am
by Resident Skumfuk
...you're talented - yes. butttt

just in my opinion, i hate that type of emo-boy unidentifiable tone of voice.. Sounds so cookie cutter cause theres a 1000 other bands who's singer sounds just like that.

But if you're going for that 'genre' , then congrats good song :happy:

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:32 am
by AdamIFall
Thanks! I kind of agree. It comes naturally from listening to too much Blink 182 haha, but I'm trying to kick the habit of singing with such a generic tone.

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 7:29 am
by Resident Skumfuk
you still are musically talented and should pursue it! :2cool4u:

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:47 am
by silverdolphin
Great song! but the vocals need work.

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:12 am
by jaw knee jak
Agreed, very good song writer but find your own voice

Re: My New Song

Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:06 pm
by AdamIFall
Thanks for all the suggestions and comments. Would you say the vocals are any better or worse on this one? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8x8kYnTKI-U

Re: My New Song

Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:26 pm
by noexcuses
its good like i would buy it buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
your voices seem like they r trying to hard

Re: My New Song

Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:29 pm
by noexcuses
AdamIFall wrote:Thanks for all the suggestions and comments. Would you say the vocals are any better or worse on this one? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8x8kYnTKI-U
the vocals r wayy better in this vid, more natural
i think if u remake the first vid with ^ those natural vocals it will sound amazing

Re: My New Song

Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:35 pm
by Mitchell
This sounds so similar to a song.. but I can't remember which one