Hey guys, I just finished a new song for my band not too long ago, and I was just looking for some feedback or criticism. It starts off kinda slow, but it kicks in. You can hear it on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4rvyfxbHdbo
Thanks so much for listening!
My New Song
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Re: My New Song
I wrote a song just like that.
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Re: My New Song
haha really? xD is it posted anywhere online?
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nope.
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...you're talented - yes. butttt
just in my opinion, i hate that type of emo-boy unidentifiable tone of voice.. Sounds so cookie cutter cause theres a 1000 other bands who's singer sounds just like that.
But if you're going for that 'genre' , then congrats good song
just in my opinion, i hate that type of emo-boy unidentifiable tone of voice.. Sounds so cookie cutter cause theres a 1000 other bands who's singer sounds just like that.
But if you're going for that 'genre' , then congrats good song
Re: My New Song
Thanks! I kind of agree. It comes naturally from listening to too much Blink 182 haha, but I'm trying to kick the habit of singing with such a generic tone.
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Re: My New Song
Great song! but the vocals need work.
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Re: My New Song
Agreed, very good song writer but find your own voice
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Re: My New Song
Thanks for all the suggestions and comments. Would you say the vocals are any better or worse on this one? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8x8kYnTKI-U
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Re: My New Song
its good like i would buy it buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
your voices seem like they r trying to hard
your voices seem like they r trying to hard
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the vocals r wayy better in this vid, more naturalAdamIFall wrote:Thanks for all the suggestions and comments. Would you say the vocals are any better or worse on this one? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8x8kYnTKI-U
i think if u remake the first vid with ^ those natural vocals it will sound amazing
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Re: My New Song
This sounds so similar to a song.. but I can't remember which one