My New Song

AdamIFall · Post by **AdamIFall** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:05 am

Hey guys, I just finished a new song for my band not too long ago, and I was just looking for some feedback or criticism. It starts off kinda slow, but it kicks in. You can hear it on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4rvyfxbHdbo

Thanks so much for listening!

bizzyd53 · Post by **bizzyd53** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:14 am

I wrote a song just like that.

AdamIFall · Post by **AdamIFall** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:16 am

haha really? xD is it posted anywhere online?

bizzyd53 · Post by **bizzyd53** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:21 am

nope.

Resident Skumfuk · Post by **Resident Skumfuk** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:26 am

...you're talented - yes. butttt

just in my opinion, i hate that type of emo-boy unidentifiable tone of voice.. Sounds so cookie cutter cause theres a 1000 other bands who's singer sounds just like that.

But if you're going for that 'genre' , then congrats good song

AdamIFall · Post by **AdamIFall** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 6:32 am

Thanks! I kind of agree. It comes naturally from listening to too much Blink 182 haha, but I'm trying to kick the habit of singing with such a generic tone.

Resident Skumfuk · Post by **Resident Skumfuk** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 7:29 am

you still are musically talented and should pursue it!

silverdolphin · Post by **silverdolphin** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:47 am

Great song! but the vocals need work.

jaw knee jak · Post by **jaw knee jak** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 10:12 am

Agreed, very good song writer but find your own voice

AdamIFall · Post by **AdamIFall** » Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:06 pm

Thanks for all the suggestions and comments. Would you say the vocals are any better or worse on this one? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8x8kYnTKI-U

noexcuses · Post by **noexcuses** » Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:26 pm

its good like i would buy it buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
your voices seem like they r trying to hard

noexcuses · Post by **noexcuses** » Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:29 pm

AdamIFall wrote:Thanks for all the suggestions and comments. Would you say the vocals are any better or worse on this one? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8x8kYnTKI-U

the vocals r wayy better in this vid, more natural
i think if u remake the first vid with ^ those natural vocals it will sound amazing

Post by **Mitchell** » Fri Feb 11, 2011 4:35 pm

This sounds so similar to a song.. but I can't remember which one

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