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Fallen Angel

Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:51 pm
by mantera41
Well this is a very rough draft right now, I write quite a bit of lyrics in my spare time...here's one:

I try to achieve perfection
but it's really just a reflection
of how I let you down
squeezed your hand let go
and watch you fall
I try to make you smile
never lasts more than awhile
there's always something I could do
but never realized till after

well I can pretend I'm an angel
just rugged, scuffed, roughed up wings
clipped and tattered
and I can no longer sing
the harmonies of happiness
till I know you're happy
till then I'm your fallen angel
banish me, there's nothing else to tell

I'd love to hear your thoughts:)

Re: Fallen Angel

Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 3:13 am
by jaw knee jak
2nd half is pretty god damn rad

Re: Fallen Angel

Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 10:00 am
by silverdolphin
The 2nd part is awesome!

Re: Fallen Angel

Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 11:09 am
by lisaNL
This is awesome! Especially the 2nd part

Re: Fallen Angel

Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:44 pm
by FuckT41182
I believe Pieces was your influence :) but right,the second part is kinda cool