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Awakened

Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:32 am
by sprinks41
this is pretty much a sequel to my other song "Sleeping Beast." both are very personal to me, so please dont mock.

Intro
I thought this would never ever happen to me
Always felt like the day would never come
Can't believe this is how it was to be
Now I can feel without being numb

Verse 1
Broke the shackles to the ball and chain
The pain is gone but the scars remain
Made my way into new territory
Starting the next chapter of my story
I no longer will feel like the misfit
Lost in the midst of the bullshit
Been released from the prison of me
I'm free, I'm free

Chorus
Silence has been broken
I've awakened my beast within
No longer trapped inside its shell
It's escaped from its tomb of hell
Is now free to roam around
This new world it has found
Jumped on the bandwagon
No longer left with my head hanging

Verse 2
Could've been a dream it was so unreal
Words can't explain how it made me feel
It became a new obsession
That ended with a depression
I'm glad I waited 'til I found trust
Instead of going out in search for lust
Released myself from the prison of me
I'm free, I'm free

(Chorus)

Re: Awakened

Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:48 am
by lisaNL
Amazing! I think it's really good :)

Re: Awakened

Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 9:35 am
by silverdolphin
Great lyrics! I really like the first verse.

Re: Awakened

Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:07 pm
by FuckT41182
Jim,I must say that it's actually fucking awesome ! the whole fucking concept is great !

the sentences with trust and lust got me the most...

I'm glad I waited 'til I found trust
Instead of going out in search for lust


you should definitely keep writing,man ! this one kind of reminds me of Rise Against

Re: Awakened

Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 1:42 am
by sprinks41
thanks everyone!