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hey im working on making this song i wrote called no warning signs and this will be the first song i've ever recorded and so far i've only recorded the 1st 43 seconds of it, can u guys tell me if its good so far. ill post the mediafire link and lyrics here.

http://www.mediafire.com/?knshrzhqknkb4d2

There were no warning signs
and now you're gone for sure
when i got out of bed
you were down on the floor

everybody was crying
you surly will be missed
you now live up high
and that is my greatest wish

the memories of you
fly through my mind
i loved it when you
would lie down by my side

i guess after it all
i will end up being fine
i wish i could have helped you
but there were no warning signs

i havent done any vocals or nything else but piano for it also, im jst taking steps.

sounds awesome so far!

Sounds good, but you have to work on your timing, you were kinda out of tempo at the beginning.