Need to re-write these lyrics
Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 5:50 pm
Hey, so my Uncle in the Philippines that's involved with the music industry there liked me song entitled "The Magnet"
(You can listen to it here:)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66gSL43lZxE
(wow my singing wasn't so great back when I uploaded this hah)
and he found this rich 7 year old boy who wants to make an album and use my song and I get royalties from it and stuff.
The problem is, my uncle says the current lyrics I have for the song don't fit him since he's 7 years old. What kind of lyrics would I write for a song for a 7 year old?
Here are the current lyrics:
[Main Riff]
[Verse 1:]
I met her just, two days ago,
And she's pulled me, way down below,
Stalking MySpace, and my facebook,
How do I break this hook?
I looked at her, she looked at me,
And now she acts, like we're married,
What do I do, what do I say?
To make her go away;
[Chorus:]
Like a magnet, she won't let go,
I tried to run but she still follows.
She begs for more, but I still yell "no!"
I guess she'll never leave me alone.
[Main Riff]
[Verse 2:]
It's been three days, she's still clinging,
And now my phone, it keeps ringing,
I wish I could, just have some space,
At least for just one day;
[Chorus]
[Bridge:]
Don't matter what I do,
Don't matter what I say,
I wish the'd get a clue,
...and leave.
[Bridge Pt 2:]
Like a magnet, she won't let go,
I tried to run but she still follows.
She begs for more, but I still yell "no!"
I guess she'll never leave me alone.
[Chorus]
[Outro]
(You can listen to it here:)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66gSL43lZxE
(wow my singing wasn't so great back when I uploaded this hah)
and he found this rich 7 year old boy who wants to make an album and use my song and I get royalties from it and stuff.
The problem is, my uncle says the current lyrics I have for the song don't fit him since he's 7 years old. What kind of lyrics would I write for a song for a 7 year old?
Here are the current lyrics:
[Main Riff]
[Verse 1:]
I met her just, two days ago,
And she's pulled me, way down below,
Stalking MySpace, and my facebook,
How do I break this hook?
I looked at her, she looked at me,
And now she acts, like we're married,
What do I do, what do I say?
To make her go away;
[Chorus:]
Like a magnet, she won't let go,
I tried to run but she still follows.
She begs for more, but I still yell "no!"
I guess she'll never leave me alone.
[Main Riff]
[Verse 2:]
It's been three days, she's still clinging,
And now my phone, it keeps ringing,
I wish I could, just have some space,
At least for just one day;
[Chorus]
[Bridge:]
Don't matter what I do,
Don't matter what I say,
I wish the'd get a clue,
...and leave.
[Bridge Pt 2:]
Like a magnet, she won't let go,
I tried to run but she still follows.
She begs for more, but I still yell "no!"
I guess she'll never leave me alone.
[Chorus]
[Outro]