Need to re-write these lyrics

[Andyrew004]

Hey, so my Uncle in the Philippines that's involved with the music industry there liked me song entitled "The Magnet"
(You can listen to it here:)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=66gSL43lZxE
(wow my singing wasn't so great back when I uploaded this hah)

and he found this rich 7 year old boy who wants to make an album and use my song and I get royalties from it and stuff.

The problem is, my uncle says the current lyrics I have for the song don't fit him since he's 7 years old. What kind of lyrics would I write for a song for a 7 year old?


Here are the current lyrics:

[Main Riff]

[Verse 1:]
I met her just, two days ago,
And she's pulled me, way down below,
Stalking MySpace, and my facebook,
How do I break this hook?

I looked at her, she looked at me,
And now she acts, like we're married,
What do I do, what do I say?
To make her go away;

[Chorus:]
Like a magnet, she won't let go,
I tried to run but she still follows.
She begs for more, but I still yell "no!"
I guess she'll never leave me alone.

[Main Riff]

[Verse 2:]
It's been three days, she's still clinging,
And now my phone, it keeps ringing,
I wish I could, just have some space,
At least for just one day;

[Chorus]

[Bridge:]
Don't matter what I do,
Don't matter what I say,
I wish the'd get a clue,
...and leave.

[Bridge Pt 2:]
Like a magnet, she won't let go,
I tried to run but she still follows.
She begs for more, but I still yell "no!"
I guess she'll never leave me alone.

[Chorus]

[Outro]

[Jenna]

i like the lyrics. u pretty much would just have 2 write a completely different song to the music u already have. what would a 7 year old sing about anyways? bunnies? just random stuff?

[soft-punker]

You would give this song to the next Justin Bieber?

[Andyrew004]

i like the lyrics. u pretty much would just have 2 write a completely different song to the music u already have. what would a 7 year old sing about anyways? bunnies? just random stuff?

thanks. I'll definitely just try to pull random lyrics out and see what I can do.

You would give this song to the next Justin Bieber?

haha when you put it that way, it makes me feel bad for doing this =P. thankfully I'l be changing the title of the song and the lyrics, and it's in the Philippines.

[Jake-41]

Is this song about rape?

[Andyrew004]

Is this song about rape?

LOL! Well it's about a crazy and clingy ex gf in general.


For those of you who are curious, I re-wrote some random crappy lyrics in 5 min. I also re-named the song Saturday so my band could use "The Magnet"

[Main Riff]

[Verse 1:]
I slept through my, alarm again,
Guess I'll be late, to see my friends,
But it's alright, but it's okay,
I'll still have a fun-filled day.

Got in the car, and couldn't wait,
I should've have been, up before eight,
Finally here, with my buddies,
A day with no worries.

[Chorus:]
Saturday, oh I love this day,
I wouldn't have it any other way;
I wish this day just would never end,
And I could keep hanging with my friends.

[Main Riff]

[Verse 2:]
Today we're at, a cool theme park,
The lights came on, when it got dark,
I wish that I, could just freeze time,
And be here the whole night.

[Chorus]

[Bridge:]
Don't matter what I do,
Don't matter what I say,
I can't make each day Saturday.

[Bridge Pt 2:]
Saturday, oh I love this day,
I wouldn't have it any other way;
I wish this day just would never end,
And I could keep hanging with my friends.

[Chorus]

[Outro]

[UltraKolby]

Awesome song. And how can a 7 year old do an album??

[Andyrew004]

Awesome song. And how can a 7 year old do an album??

Thanks! Well, to be honest I'm not sure how he's doing it. I think since he's rich, he's having people write songs for him.

[Jenna]

lol that's pretty good for just random stuff. i think it's more i can see a 7 year old singin about that